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  Dancing Through Sunbeams
by jude forese
Thursday, April 20, 2006
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I would forfeit years from my life
Just to hear your voice,
Just to wander through your thoughts,
To touch the skin of your desires

I inhale the twilight:
That glorious exchange
Of night and morning
Where spirits, yet to be dissolved
Dance among the shadows of sunlight,
Filtering into the dreams
Of shared awakening

Here, I sense the movement
Of our planet, revolving
Through the galactic haze of stars,
Aging among gaseous bodies,
Spinning through the imagination
Of creative impetus

The fragrance of spring
Intermingles with the atmosphere
Of misty celebration

I would surrender the cycle of a lifetime
Just to see you dancing
Through sunbeams again

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Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
intoxicating. Filled with light and sweet romance.
Reviewed by Gloria Buono Daly
Dancing as though no one is watching you and your heart will sing. Your loved one is very special. Thanks for sharing it. Regards, Gloria
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Love can result in significant sacrifice, if only poetic.

Reviewed by Sandie Angel
A strong affirmation of love! Well-done Robert!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Aberjhani
Love in the form of this cosmic epic is a beautiful thing to behold indeed.
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
As usual, judging by the myriad diversity of comments, you capture the essence of your thoughts in a prism that both absorbs light and transmits it in equal measures, touching differing spots on the souls and spirits of many: the sign of good poetry, no??!! :)) Anyways, reckon this shoots straight into my new Number 1 slot in terms of its sheer elegance and quality of expression; for its lucidity and integrity and for it's purposeful movement which inspires both hope and vision. This has the breath of eternal youth about it, whilst at the same time speaking of the grace and beauty of ageing like oak-cask wine. I find myself wanting to speak of it being a "twin-flame" write - though I have to say I know little about such things. It just has that feel and yearning somehow. And... as to it being about someone/thing that has passed, it seems to me very contemporary and forward-looking: I think you need surrender nothing but can perhaps instead live in the hope and anticipation of the ride of a lifetime in line with the festive partying of spirit that you envisage! Why walk when you can dance and why pedal when you can glide??!! :)) Absolutely love this one... Just for a change. K xx
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
And this is why she will dance for you :-) Beautiful write.
Reviewed by George Jackson
Haunting. Romantic. Excellent.
Reviewed by Sherry Heim
An awakening of sorts to the reality that someone has quite possibly left your life forever. Like a bolt of lightening that passed through both of you and has left an eternal scar upon your body, it is an experience that you will never be able to forget. Forever attracted to that kindred soul that owns a piece of reality that only the two of you share, your devotion remains timeless. Intense beauty of a write, Jude.
Take care,
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) beautiful...Jude!
It made me want to do a painting in oil of those marvelous
images...and few poems do that to me.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Blimey, what a powerful declaration. So full of hope and positivity, pure magic....
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Quite a longing here, Robert, and most powerfully penned.
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Dancing Through Sunbeams is a witness of death, metaphorical or not, followed by a rebirth. Pursues creation of a new body, a mystical body, on another plane. Metaphysical poem, Jude.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Most beautiful poetry...quite in collaboration with mine today I think!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
do you write of a spirit dissolved or one crippled by life and resigned to shadow? On second thought, I like it that I don't know, Jude, because then I can read and ponder it, making my own way toward "shadows of sunlight," one foot in front of the other, re-membering the fragrance of spring when once we all danced through sunbeams, undaunted and unafraid. Dawn
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Beautifully imaged, written poem. We're both looking up. :) Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Beauty is in the love attatched to our hearts and a longing that will just not go away. Absolute beauty is when you write about it so prodoundly.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Sublime poem, so eloquently expressed! But it saddens me,that you are writing of someone that you lost and may never see again. Very bittersweet!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
wow!!! simply wow! I'm the same believer as this is a universal and cosmic entangled dance.
Reviewed by Peter Paton
You are prepared for great sacrifices in this romantic maelstrom...
That don't happen very often in the Grand Scheme of things !
Scintillating poetry
Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Glorious, romanitic, beauty, angelic.......

Love, JoAnne
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