ROCK-Salt! Art Proctor
· A Moosecapade
· A novel, Chapter one, temporarily discontinued
· A Novel, chapter one, continued.
· A Beary Scary Story.
· A novel. a few pages at a time.
· God and the Spider
· It shouldn't take a brick!!
· Beer, Fishing, Golf, & Sex
· The Grey Headed Brigade
· A hedge on the pledge
· WHAT !!?
· If teachers, taught, did preachers, praught?
· Recall Notice!
· Imagine that!
· God's love for us!-- Bobby's dime
· What Next?
· The Book
· In God We Trust
· Old vs New
· Words for His Word's Sake.
· Threat of Debt
· Raccoon Madness
· A Rich Man
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My heart didn't brake, It's fine and true . But it might and yours just might too., if you don't do what you know you should do. cause the last part of your awesome poem just doesn't ring true , for me and my darling dear, it didn't really for you. Have faith do what your heart says to do, don't answer to past owies that aren't relevant to now or an awesome future in His Glory and Might. Art
I wish your heart were like your words, and in a way it is, to accept as pure one moment then into your fears, you give. You begin to expound of love that you rejected, but again it might be found. you seem to lack the conviction, that your words sure do portray, I feel you can't over come the price, that you once had to pay. To pay for your own choices,that caused such awful hurt, for your flesh and heart,you hold now from such fate, in somewhat of a satisfied, free from involvement, state, better than to be beat, you feel all the hate. Be beat down and down again, when your heart you really did give, don't you know the Lord can heal, can't you see what he's trying to give.? A chance at bliss , where you can let go of all the hurt and pain, where 2 can really become one, answering each to each, the same. He gave the man a lead to keep, but told him to be true , to His way of treating her, by doing what he says to do. By adoration she'll give all of herself and she will come to you, and be and do all that you'd ever want or need, if in Me you are true . Its' tried and tested and true . And you know that I know it , as my obedience I've shown in plenty, over and over to you. So quit your pining and let your heart take a chance, just grab yourself by the pants, and tell your love your sorry,you want another chance, to show you can not only respond to, but initiate romance. If it takes you coming to me, just see it as your fate, better to let your love know, than to leave him at the gate. A love so fine , you can't imagine, the love I'll give to you.because my sweet darling, I must give, to make my life complete, and in the giving I'll receive, for the first time in my life, a friend a lover and a mate if you will be my wife, I'll give you my every single gosh-darned thing, my very best, my life. I love you and have for a while, don't let this 2nd time chance pass by, show the class you have and are, and set your heart free, and come to me, with a smile.
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|Reviewed by stefani szvetecz (Reader)
|wow!!!! thats totally amazing u have tru talent and ur gonna ggo far!!!
|Reviewed by Knight Flo (Reader)
|I adore this poem :)
remarkable, just brilliant!
|Reviewed by J M
|This is beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
A very powerful and robust message you deliver to the subject of your attentions...
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most beautiful offering!!
Thanks for sharing!!