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by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Friday, April 21, 2006
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I don't know *where* this one came from. I hope you like it.

Evening.  And the sun, tired
after a long hard day,
puts itself to bed, pulling
multi-hued clouds over
its head, ready for the night.

Evening.  And the windows are
open, inviting the
breeze to come in and set a
spell as Mama serves the
pot roast and vegetables.

Evening.  Dinnertime over,
Mama and I go on the
porch, watching lightning bugs pop
out like stars, one by one,
in time to the cricket's rasp.

Evening.  The loveliest part
of the day, when I can
curl up with Mama under
the covers, and take all
night to make her dreams come true .  :)

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
It is very beautiful!
Love, Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Beautiful and magical offering!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell
It could only come from your heart, and that in itself makes it beautiful.
Reviewed by Paul Williams
Just a lovely magical write Karla. Excellent.

Reviewed by totally anonymous
outstanding! beautiful imagery
Reviewed by jude forese
this is wonderful ... it recaptures the mystery, love and splendor of childhood ...
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Well you have captured us from morning into evenigh and did it with some of your best prose! Very beautifully imaged Karla! Kudo's!
Wherever it came from, keep it coming;-)!

Reviewed by B Thomas Daniels
woke up to a wonderful poem and now the sun sets in Texas to another

Reviewed by Felix Perry
This is indeed one of your best and totally my favorite of all the works of yours I have read. Your muse was working hard to create this masterpiece of feelings.

Reviewed by F William Broome
Add me to the tag-a-longs, for this is the way I was raised... under a different but same, evning sky over in Georgia. Beautiful memories seeping out of your pen, to give us an unforgettable evening. - Bill
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Your poetry of the night sky always is a reason to gout doors and look up. Thanks for the beauty of your pen.
Love and peace,
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Beautiful write, thanks for sharing this one with us.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Evening does seem to be a magical part of the day for kids, when play has been played and it is getting ready for bed time after supper. Brings back images of my youth.
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
I love it, another great write from your pen
God Bless
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

This is so pretty; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Peter Paton
I love this rocking on the porch...:)
Reminded me of summer nights in Georgia !
Love and Blessings
Reviewed by john zimmerman

a lovely evocative study nicely done

good write


Reviewed by Cynthia Borris

Very relaxing prose. I was drawn into the scene and just wanted to put up my feet and stay a while.

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