|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|No man ever had a more loving tribute!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|As always you capture my attention right from the start as I wonder who this mystery man is and how he can touch and affect your sweet heart so strongly. Tender, loving write here with a lot of ingrained passion.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|A winner...great write Susan!!
|Reviewed by . ignis
|I think I know this guy, he used to be an utter ******* who used to believe in man's logic of limited scope that continuously runs into walls he was incapable to tear down, but who continued to run into other walls that trapped him in a world of illusion and paradox. But I think he's ok now since GOD's grace allowed him a peek at the infinite power of HIS Light. :D
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Baring our souls in such a way as this is what makes poetry, and those who are POETS, so wonderful. You have found yourself within the poetry of your own soul and that finding is a wonderful thing. You've a knack for turning an ordinary phrase just a tiny bit differently that the rest of us is amazing. It reflects your pure poet's soul. I loved this one very much.|
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|No one could conceive of, much less write, such lines...
unless that person had loved, does love, and will love again.
Your one word applies; breathless. It leaves me so, relishing all of your words in a complete statement of endless and deep love.
Congratulations. ... one more breath; Thanks!
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|PURE INSPIRATION AND SHEER BRILLIANCE!! My hat's off to you, Susan... wonderful sentiment, articulation and imagery here. The Muse must be very, very powerful in this one! :)) Is he nautical, by any chance???!! Ref your comment on Halcyon!! :)) LOL Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
A full declaration of love and admiration embroidered with words of passion, emotion and intent...
The object of your intentions will be thrilled to receive this sweet invitation..
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Beautiful. Absolutely mesmerizing verse. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Lovely write, Susan; very well done! BRAVA! :)|
|Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor
|Reviewed by Martin Hebert
|~~Susan~~once again, an outstanding poem~~