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For Joseph's Tres Linhas
by Peter Paton
Monday, May 01, 2006
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Tres Linhas








" In answer to Joseph's Challenge, the Portugese Tres Linhas ( Three Lines ) which is a worthy and laudable format that may well supersede the haiku

All three lines must rhyme in syllables of 5, 6 & 7, respectively. Should also contain imagery that celebrates some sort of connection between nature and spirit.

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Sweet angel of mine

you make my heart feel fine

beautiful star so sublime

 

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006

 

For Joseph's Tres Linhas

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Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight* 5/2/2006
Thanks for responding to the challenge, Peter! And what a splendid job you did on your first attempt!

Love & Light,
Joseph
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 5/2/2006
Sweet loving piece!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/1/2006
Lovely, Peter, just lovely! Very well done; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 5/1/2006
Beautiful job with Joseph's new format. Very well done!
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/1/2006
Sweet and lovely, a beautiful answer to the challenge Peter!
This could be a great song if you add some lyrics;-)
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 5/1/2006
Now This Is Hot Romantic Poetry....

TRASK
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 5/1/2006
You "done good" sweet Peter.

susan
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 5/1/2006
Aw, you big old softie, you. But then I knew that. Very nicely done.
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 5/1/2006
Sweet and wonderful, perfection all the way!
Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader) 5/1/2006
((((Heavenly, you make the angels sing, as always Peter)))))

Love From A Dove
Reviewed by George Carroll 5/1/2006
You hit it on the barrel head, Peter.
Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia 5/1/2006
excellent, Peter!
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