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Care For a Moondance? by Susan K. de Vegter Monday, May 01, 2006 Rated "PG" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan

Should I awaken from my slumber To find my dream is torn asunder Then I have dreamed the greatest passion That sets my mind a flow in fashions That come to me from afar Blinded me with your star This nova of my hearts desire Has taken up this lust for fire You reached within my soul so deep Unleashed desires I thought to keep Within... for safety was the bain For which I kept my love in chains From gentle tugs of rhythm deep That sought the reasons that I keep Inside... for you are just my chance To keep intact this here Moondance I need to take..forsake all others For pals are friends but hearts are lovers And which are you, my sweet man? The pal of spirit or heart in hand Or the form to mold for life... a friend To ever trust ...until the end? The answer is for you to ponder As I gaze to muse but wonder Is this sky of midnight blue... Laced with diamonds... sent from you? I look upon your star tonight... For friends I have but love... I might Just hold so dear in valleys deep... Secure to check the fears that keep My heart so hollow and needs the chance To hold so dear your sweet moondance I'll gaze upon this sky so grand Your star and me...hand in hand. � 2006 Susan K. de Vegter

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull	5/2/2006

Beautiful thoughts. Ron




Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner	5/2/2006

Susan, WOW, this is gorgeously penned and illustrated; and yes, I'd love another whirl around the stars. :) Beautiful. (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	5/2/2006

You ROMANTIC you!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by . ignis	5/2/2006

There's a bright white aura around these words. Like a reflection of the stars they speak of. Space and time will cease to be, but the Light is immortal, true, containing all we are. This here, on the blue planet, is merely an ephemeral stint, a fragment of infinity that may seem like ages to us, off the scale of our perception often, but finite in any case. What we truly are however, is not just what is visible, palpable, detectable in here and now. We are more than that. Our desires, however unimaginable they may seem today, are more than that too. They all serve one purpose, which is the Light. RAge




Reviewed by totally anonymous	5/1/2006

beautiful romantic write




Reviewed by E T Waldron	5/1/2006

I love your moondance and though much different in presentation and wording we have similar topics tonight;-) Beautiful work Susan!




Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)	5/1/2006

A little moondance by any other name is seek and seizure or find annd fondle, maybe even bite and lick. Still, yet and still, if the moon will bless these unions of lust I say that is all that is needed to make it right in my eyes. All kidding aside, this poem was damn good, Susan.




Reviewed by William Bonilla	5/1/2006

enjoyed your heavenly write star gazing is great I love it myself brings lots of inspiration Love & Peace William




Reviewed by Peter Paton	5/1/2006

Susan You pull all the right switches, and press all the right buttons in flowing synchronicity... This compelling write has the magnetic pull of the lunar tides...:) Love and Light Peter




Reviewed by Felix Perry	5/1/2006

Symetrical romance across the heavens in a slow dance filled with passion and desire. Love it. felix