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A Lover's Art
by Susan K. de Vegter

Friday, May 05, 2006
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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...a Lover's Artwork

I lie among tasseled brocade and enhale the passion love has made
Then feel your form break through the air and suddenly you're standing there
I sense your shadow then grab my brush and sketch a line of love for us
This form where sabled bristles flow is tribute to the love that grows
The next smooth stroke is your eyes, they seem half closed, my passion flies
Just then a flow of fuller lips to bend and collect your kissing sips
Bristled golden moonlit night...shines upon this passion bright
Added blues to softer shades, deep within where pleasures' made
Hidden trove with treasures deep awaiting plunges fluids creep
Deep within the sweep of red nerves launch flesh to spew instead
Keep the rhythm hearts partaking and color hunger as it wakens
Oranges and magentas flowing into fruity peaches glowing
Flesh tones fade then turn rosy, flash of mountain laurel poseys
Dandelion- yellowed hair...titanium porcelain skin so rare
Kissing dots upon each ripple hardened berries of crimson nipples
Billowed melons flesh so sweet tender juices ... a lover's feast
Legs of salmon-colored skin opening where this love begins
Freckled, seinna spots laced about with passion... hot
The absolute and firm request from eager
Legs entwined once they merge licking smells and arching curves
Caressing flames that beg "Come Near!" gently passion speaks, "I'm Here!
Opened vees that hug your line splashed on juices...from bold to fine
Sketched with colors in their fashion, glowing canvas of sabled passion.

Author ~ Susan K. de Vegter
copyright 2006

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Reviewed by D Johnson 1/3/2013
A sensuously beautiful write.
Reviewed by Debbie Lacy 10/16/2012
Ah, such sultry sweet passion! I love it Susan and thanks for the share. Blessings to you!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/22/2012
There is so much to "digest" and to absorb in this poem, Susan. You write poetry that awakens the senses, the emotions and that elicit meaningful responses. Thank you for sharing this poetic gift. Love and best wishes to you,

Reviewed by Ed J. 1/21/2008
WOW! This is wonderfully done, conveys many emotions, some better left unsaid LOL. Fantastic!

Stay well and keep writing.

Reviewed by Simon Barreiros 12/28/2007
Review it? I'm so fortunate to have seen it. You write treasures Susan. Wonderful vistas and feelings to fill our hearts and souls with.
Reviewed by Emily Tarantino 8/7/2007
I have no words left...this poem is absolutely beautiful...
Reviewed by Dark Knight 4/28/2007
Lovely poetry-you painted colorful images upon my mind-so much that I feel like a cigarette-and I don't smoke-well done
Reviewed by CJ Heck 1/19/2007
WOW, Susan ... this is so devine, so erotic. You are masterful in your writings of love, dear poetlady.
Reviewed by E. Richardson 11/26/2006
delightully sensual...classically erotic...this is really, where are my cigs...hehehehehe
Reviewed by William Short (Reader) 6/3/2006
That was beautiful Dear, I loved it. Bill
Reviewed by Broken Poet 5/18/2006
Beautifully perfect depiction of passion!
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 5/7/2006
So luscious one doesn't know whether to lick or eat it.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 5/6/2006
A Lover's Art is symbolic of artistic union which flows sensuous scene to sensuous scene. A hot way to express a passionate mood, Susan! You have a gift for working with imagery through painting a word canvas. It's unique and evokes free-flowing feelings in a hybrid word-art painting.

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 5/6/2006
Brilliant poetry!
Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/6/2006

A masterpiece, beautifully described in flowing, easy verse; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 5/6/2006
A master piece!!

You look Jerry!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Peter Paton 5/6/2006
This is animated artwork of the highest degree, you transmute your feelings in vivid and acute form to the canvas of love and passion
Reviewed by Felix Perry 5/6/2006
Once again you dazzle me with your combination and blending of two art form into one, this work is so vivid and hot thereis no need to see the actual canvas your painting is on, your words capture our senses completly.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 5/6/2006
Nothing like a little foreplay in antisipation of the main event. Hubba-hubba. (Hubba-hubba? Jeez!)
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 5/6/2006
well done
Reviewed by George Carroll 5/6/2006
You paint with passion what an artist feels as he or she creates a masterpiece in the human form. Excellent.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/5/2006
Wow! This one started off smooth, and grew until the volcano blew! Great intensity, Susan!HOT poem!


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