by A. Santo
Saturday, May 06, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Then the sun,
Sky of blue,
Clouds of white,
Lands face changed,
Trees a splinter,
I’m still here,
You are too,
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|Reviewed by George Carroll
|A snappy write that brings rivulets of light to bear on the readers mind.|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Yes it does and the cadense of your poem keeps us all in rhythm.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|What a beautful cascade of words bringing love to life in the light of the moon...
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Great offering..love the imagery!!
|Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
|(((Wonderful imagery ))) I have missed your precious writings..
Peace & Love, Dove
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Gotta love it! When life it is put into this context, we realize that there are many things about it that we cannot control. That is good, most of the time when we attempt controlling situations, everything turns to mush. Good.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Life never ends. I love the theme of your poem, Amira. Merci! Amour et paix à toi,
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
Life is all important, and love is the zenith of all things...
The temporal we can replace, but the uniqueness and divinity of the individual will never be seen the likes of again on this globe..
I'm glad and relieved that you survived the storm of life dear one,
to continue to let your heart and love display all its qualities for
the betterment and good of God and Mankind
Love and Blessings