|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Wouldn't dare guess...
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Fantastic story told in verse with the images and passion that only you can paint into a poem. Well done,
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Ah, Gabran, I soaked up some of his wisdom in past years. I see below that some are puzzled by your intent here. Me? I don't much care about intent, it is the reading and my own interputations that I care about. That makes me selfish? Probably. What can I say? I find within this exceptional piece of poetry age-old discoveries and truths realized. When he "Took a part and left a whole," then wandered off to some other zip code, this woman was not sad, because she had been given reason for life. Life, then, is this poetry's premise. Well done, you are quite the philosophical one these days, Susan.|
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|Susan - I'm still working on this one. You have me guessing at several meanings within your words. Then, again, I'm not too sure that I understand your intent to do other than to keep me guessing. Again, "I'll get back to you on this one." - Bill
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
You open a lot of doors with this cryptic write, and leave some others slightly ajar, a wise decision, as my beloved Aunt always used to say...." Never, ever close a door behind you in life completely "
Love and Harmony
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
This one is FANTASTIC!!!!! I love the rhythm and the rhyme of this one! Wonderful flow!!!!! Wish I had written this. Heeeheee!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Love the mystery your have poured into this write leaving the reader with questions and so many possible answers :-) thank you.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This is one to ponder Susan, and written with a fine cryptic pen! You are not only prolific, but wise as well;-)Captivating write!