|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|This is most thought-inciting and gives pause for reflection, Safi. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|A wonderful write with a great message. "Hopes should therefore be lit by the white thread in our horizon" is wonderful advice (being a uncurable optimistic, we know)
Birgit and Roger
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Drink the dews of happiness in the conclusion of your work.
One can learn from the past only if one's memories are kept activated in the present.
The penultimate stanza reads:
"Moments lived in the past
should serve us in so far as the manure is loaded
enough to yield food for thought."
I couldn't read it as part of the main subject dealt in the poem, for "FOOD" is a primary nourishment. "MANURE" is a fertilizer from animal excrement.
"We may learn from the Past" put me to use my critical tools, and stimulated my imagination.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Marguerite Lemoine
|My dear, you are so deep - like the water you potrait so beautifully - what a joy to hear from you -may you be blessed by the past - the presece and the future. catus flower|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Excellent write; very well penned! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|A thought-provoking piece! Well-done!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)