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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/8/2006 |
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Susan,
Sublime, perfect longing in this excellent write...well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor |
5/8/2006 |
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| Masterfully done. Your dreams are but a prayer from reality. Art |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/8/2006 |
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You nailed this one to the groove!!
Well done Susan!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by A. Santo |
5/8/2006 |
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Your romantic heart is one that covers every corner of the soul:
The wonderment, the passion, the submission of self AND you also bring the balance to those endearments with the realisations of the forlorn and unrequited longings held so deeply for the lover of our souls dreams. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
5/8/2006 |
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| "Cut a fevered mattress groove" Oh, boy! Without a doubt the best poem of desire projected to a nameless lover I have ever read. Tremendous. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
5/8/2006 |
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Susan
A fever pitched and passionate offering....
Cometh the hour, cometh the man !
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/8/2006 |
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Sweet the woman's desires expressed by a woman who has the passion of a lioness. Well done dear friend.
Hugs.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/8/2006 |
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excellent write, susan; very well done! take a bow; brava!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Martin Hebert |
5/8/2006 |
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~~Susan~~this poem echos screams of passion and sadness~~my tears~~
~~martin~~ |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
5/8/2006 |
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| this is just so good, i'm speechless |
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