Wynona 4th Grade: we are learning to use nom de plume and we are learning poetry writing
**Cellphone by A.P.W
talking, talking, talking
I am talking on my cellphone.
**Horses by RL Rider
caring, running, smiling
I Ride her through ponds.
**Dragons by Ray Gun
firebreathing, smokeblowing, flying
The flying dragon is dangerous when breathing fire.
**My Dog by Nick
barking, fighting, playing
He is our best dog.
** Scout Monument by B.E.N.
building, melting, molding
In Pawhuska, Oklahoma the Boy Scouts are building a $125,000 monument.
**My School Library by Max
reading, looking, whispering
A library is a whispering, looking and reading place
**Buying by M.E. Writer
walking, looking, buying
Shopping is expensive.
Wolves by Ryan
hunting, eating, watching
Wolves are great hunters.
** My Cat by Lee
coming, loving, touching
She is a little cat.
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|Reviewed by Free Spirit
This stuff is so cute and adorable
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Nicely written . . .!
|Reviewed by Mary Coe
|Very original. I liked this.|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|They are all so interesting. Wonderful talents!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Fantastic cinquain. I'm awed at the simple grace which comes from you children. You know you have a great teacher, don't you? Keep on writing!
|Reviewed by Vicki Crom (Reader)
|May I borrow the library poem? These all are touching.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|The creativity of childhood shines through these cinquain. Thank you for sharing them. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Walker Jackson (Reader)
|Simply, fresh, pure and original.|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Okay, how did these kids get to be so much better than me...? Some may turn out to be a Stephen King in the future, whereas I just have enough trouble being me...Ed|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|this forth grade class is writing some wonderful poems ... and they've have an excellent teacher to guide them ...|
|Reviewed by Constance Gotsch
|What neat stuff you're doing. I especially like Dragons and Wolves, and my school library. the Boy Scout one is good too. The shooping one's a hoot.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|lol I agree with Kate......shoppaholic...lol!!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Thank you for sharing the children's writing with us. I had to laugh with the shopping one, the conclusion being that shopping is expensive :-) I love the honesty of the youth. Enjoyed each one that I have read here. Delightful descriptions and right on target with each thought.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Nice of you to post these little gems.|