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Ballerina
by Huda Orfali

Monday, May 15, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Away from you
I’m like a ballerina rotating alone
Locked in her velvet music box
Dancing to the moonlight tune

Away from you
I sit here in silence,
Just thinking of you
Holding my breath
For the next kiss
That will revive our tune

Away from you
I'm suffocating with tears
Longing to reach out and touch you
When my hand touches the empty air
My hand falls
My heart breaks and dreams
That the next time I reach out
You’ll be there
To hold me
And we dance together
To the moonlight tune
 

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Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson 5/16/2006
Beautiful write Huda...I love the free expression of this longing write. Splendid.

~Peace and Blessings~
Reviewed by jude forese 5/16/2006
excellent allegory and imagery, Huda ... your poem like a ballet dancer is a moving display of creative form ...
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 5/16/2006
Aaah!! Now I get it!! I have just come from Peter's page and your collaboration is delightful - NO WONDER!! Great to get a glimpse of the Muse at work and love this the inspiration, doubtless, behind the joint work. Delicate as the dance of love itself, Huda. Bless you, Kate xx
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 5/16/2006
A beautiful romantic longing, heartbreaking lovelyness,
Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Suzie Palmer 5/15/2006
Oh Huda,
Absolutely beautiful and heartfelt!
May you dance with your prince; posthaste!!
Love & Unity Suzie :-D
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 5/15/2006

I have enjoyed the theme, contents and imagery of "Ballerina".

I salute You, Poet.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Michael Wells 5/15/2006
I can hear the moonlight tune in your magical verse
Very beautiful poem, Huda
I agree with the others; brilliant analogy
God bless - Michael
Reviewed by Silvia Hartmann 5/15/2006
I really recognise that sensation of feeling in storage until "they" return. That's a very cool poem.

SFx
Reviewed by Jane Rodway 5/15/2006
Loved this analogy, really brilliant, that first verse especially, and the suffocating at the end makes me think of the boxed closed on the ballerina, good work.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 5/15/2006
Love is all, Huda! Thank you for sharing these precious sentiments. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader) 5/15/2006
Beautiful descriptions..

Peace & Love, Dove
Reviewed by George Carroll 5/15/2006
Love is intoxicating and fills you with longing. Splendid write.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/15/2006
Huda, such a beautiful longing , love poem! Choosing the ballerina an excellnt analogy, as it depicts their true state so often. Lovely work!

Love,
eT
Reviewed by Peter Paton 5/15/2006
This is absolutely gorgeous, Huda
The consummate love poem...:)
And the picture of the ballerina is exquisite...
Love and Peace
Peter



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