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|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Thought provoking write!!
Welcome to AD!!
|Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame
|First fo al WELCOME to AD Michael!
..AND this is a powerful way to burst upon us here..YAY!
Can hardly wait for your second piece..
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|At first perusal - guttural and sublime.
At second - like a scene from Star Gate
At third - the sad results of too much viagra
At fourth - a subliminal invitation to young women
At fifth perusal - a quote from Tennyson:
"Lying robed in snowy white
That loosely flew to left and right
The leaves upon her falling light
Through the noise of the night."
Beauty will always prevail over the inane!
|Reviewed by A PAX
|omg........she did he snake
or the snake did her???
oh my god........that harlot!!!
lol just kidding, enjoyed the write
pax lol A
|Reviewed by Huda Orfali
|Death pictured as love
Thanks for your reviews and welcome to the Den
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
I concur with Reg below completely
And welcome to the board my friend...and thank you for your kind reviews..most appreciated..
Your poem reminded me of King Solomon and the Queen of Sheba !
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Somehow mythical and surreal; I find this quite compelling. Thank you, Michael. If you are new to AD, welcome! Love and peace to you,