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One Fire
by Vesna * Vanessa
Wednesday, May 17, 2006
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You catch my  breath  in waves
as my heart thunders

 in remembrance
of a somehow familiar Love

flowing gently from above

This enchanting

 elusive dance

resonates in voice and glance
from somewhere in the past

I know you

Knight of my heart

Though you are still just out of reach

I  your love  beseech
 for a  memory burns in my soul
wherein you are my goal



We ..luminescent souls
in essence One
eternally a  blazing sun
in  freedom  joy ecstasy and Love

fit together as hand in glove
Twin Flames incomplete alone
yet in unity  One.. upon Love's throne


Our promise ..
the eternal promise that we made
to find one another has not been erased
now it draws memory to our senses
though still  unclear our path commences



let the promises

of  lifetimes past  be realized anew

hold me close to your Light ever my Love true
let us  draw from Our strength
as our memory breathes life

forgetting all that ever was

all our pain and strife


Come to me Beloved One
for we are now the covenant ..the Sun

soaring through the cosmos deep

forever waking those that sleep

for this Love has given wing

to life of hearts that now sing

ablaze with a fervent desire

to be and burn as One Fire!






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Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) 7/19/2006
Whoooooooooooo....what a beautifully passionate piece!!!
Makes me want to go out and kiss someone...soon...
Reviewed by L. Figgins 6/21/2006
Beautiful, passionate and stirring write, Vesna! Wish I could still believe in the dream. So glad you've realized yours. Brightest blessings to both...

Reviewed by Barbara Terry 6/16/2006
Love is very sweet, isn't it Vesna? You have written a very passionate, romantic poem of yearnig and love from a distance. I know that feeling very well. Thanx for sharing Vesna, I really like this one.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

Reviewed by A PAX 5/23/2006
Its a great feeling, isn't it
Wonderful experession
you are blessed.
pax A
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight* 5/22/2006
Dear Vesna,

Promises etched with fire are always fulfilled. An inspired write!

Love & Light,
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 5/22/2006
This is soul-stirring, Vesna. I feel this write of yours. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 5/20/2006
The timer for two flames has been set for another fifteen minutes as a reminder that the One Fire is worth more time, as it has already been lifetimes! Intuitively, you are making good use of your time and One Flame, Vesna!

Reviewed by Aberjhani 5/19/2006
A sublime meditation on the magical union of soul and soul, heart and heart, and body and body. Beautiful.
Reviewed by Helen Downey 5/18/2006
Beautifully written. I could imagine two deeply committed individuals saying this to each other as vows when they unite together.

Reviewed by Paul Williams 5/18/2006
Fire bred passion that burns brightly for all Vesna.

Reviewed by N/A none (Reader) 5/18/2006
The rapture of mystic duality, replete with captivating imagery trumpeting momentous change, at last begins to merge, after many lifetimes upon the cross of matter, with the One Eternal Flame. Fire by friction gives way to the fire of illumination, holding yet the promise of Reality.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/18/2006
You capture the duality of love so well Vesna! Your a flame that nurns for all lovers everywhere,including the divine! Kudo's!

Reviewed by richard cederberg 5/18/2006
"flowing gently from above" I believe is the pivotal phrase in this piece. Wisely placed in the fifth line, the elocution and shameless rendering of the writers heart flows as a mysterious eulogy to the Creator, and, at the same time, I believe, a touching heart cry to corporeal love.
"for we are now the covenant .. the sun" certainly, in my limited ability to review, reflects this womans deep spirituality. BRAVO! Richard L cederberg
Reviewed by Dale Clark 5/18/2006
One fire and I love that last stanza!
Excellent work Vesna!
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 5/18/2006
A very soulful write!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Felix Perry 5/18/2006
As always Vesna you not only capture but you enshrine your romantic topics in a mist of hearts. This love inspired write brings the reader into the heart and mind of the lover and allows us to feel the emotions you describe so well.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside 5/18/2006
This inscribes big, firey letters upon the heart and soul, Vesna, which speaks of twin-flame beauty and branding. I am slow to understand all of this, but you are beginning to make the concepts of timescale in soulmate thoughts intelligible to me... I have hitherto been puzzled as to how past/present/future work together but, through your work, the puzzle in my mind is beginning to fit. Love the questing in this and the unquenchable longing is bittersweet. Thank you always for the precision of thought and craft in your lovely writing. Bless you, Kate xx

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