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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
5/21/2006 |
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Surrender is always frightening. Whether to the current or love. Even this tortoise's powerful legs can't fight a strong current.
All she can do is let it carry her. Concentrated power, Sara...
Lin |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/21/2006 |
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| the depth to this poem is awesome ... |
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| Reviewed by Gary Gebert |
5/20/2006 |
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Hi Sara! The poem is an excellent example of the use of specific words to make a specific profound statement. Great write.
Gary |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/20/2006 |
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Totally awesome write...so much said and so much implied with so few words you have had a complete discussion. Great stuff.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/20/2006 |
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WOW. W O W! Pic and verse are amazing; BRAVA!
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
5/20/2006 |
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ohhh
this poem and pic are so symbolic
the shell protects the soft turtle body
and its diving deep
deep into love
wonderful blend, I try to do that with my posts too
some people get it, some don't
but I do enjoy finding mysterious, and symbolic combinations
lol just to entertain ..........me
pax A
I hope your dreams come true Sara
you deserve it. |
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
5/20/2006 |
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Smilingly and gently, I bow to a master of compositon.
Such power in simplicity!
I'm a green turtle of envy.
-Bill
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/19/2006 |
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Well.
Sara.
I know you're not writing about me.
But dreams are good, you know.
Thank you for sharing this.
It provoked a huge reaction in me.
Love and peace and all good things to you,
Regis
I'd never ever frighten you. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/19/2006 |
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Love the poem and art! Great combo Sara!
eT |
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| Reviewed by Missy Cross |
5/19/2006 |
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| The image is vivid and compeliing; your words are even more so. This piece is like a guilty whisper of the heart an it's courageous for that. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
5/19/2006 |
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Wonderful painting! It looks so real that at first I thought it was a photo.!
Wonderful poem as well for these three lines cam tell so much of a story that could have been told in so many ways. It is like an opening of a story to be told, and there are many ways to tell this story.
Both the poem and the painting are very creative!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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