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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/21/2006 |
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Day dreaming personified. Your advise is good advice.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
5/20/2006 |
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All the candy imagery I thought
I was lost in a candy land store
I did ewnjoyed this write
Just keep those happy thoughts
Love & Peace
William |
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| Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor |
5/20/2006 |
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| Aah! A day so fine. Beautiful flowing tale of daydreams and wishes, , of love, a sweet mate that floats thru the chambers of the mind, not found, but realized, but oh, hell, It's not what may come, but rather the moment to enjoy. Art |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/20/2006 |
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Ahhhhhh Susan this one had me hook from the title to the ending. Such a magical mystical look at your feelings and emotions on such a truely happy day. Love it.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
5/20/2006 |
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Susan
When you think on God....you receive all the wisdom and succour you could ever need...
Reminded me of Dorothy and the Wizard of Oz...
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/20/2006 |
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| Cute one, Susan; very well done! :) |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/20/2006 |
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Susan,
Charming, delightful write; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by . ignis |
5/20/2006 |
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Miracles recently showed they are immortal... we just thought they belonged to the past. But they prepared futures beyond imagination (which is what miracles do...)
RAge
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
5/20/2006 |
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| Daydreaming can be wonderful. Excellent write |
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