|Reviewed by Rose Tistle (Reader)
|Beautiful and who did the fabulous illustration - would like to frame that one in my room along with your words!|
|Reviewed by Frank Whyte
|Hmmm...pragmatic passion. No matter how hard we try to let go, it seems we are always looking over our shoulders. Your writings are delightful.|
|Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic
|YAY!!! Twin Flames reunited!!
thanks for saying YES to LOVE!!!
YOU are needed!
Blessings to you and to your beoved Snuggles!
PS Have you defined YOUR co-mission yet?
|Reviewed by Robert Blackwell
|Beautifully written, Chianti.|
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|This is a very good romantic and passionate write about two souls on the path of life. There is a "however" tho.
However, love means different things to different people, but mostly it is good in their experiences. Then there are those that have no love, have never known true love, and have only had love in the form of being tolerated. L O V E is a four letter word, without meaning to some. May we all find that love, and hope that love will find us.
Thanx for sharing Chanti.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
|Reviewed by Michelle Close Mills
|A very mature write, coming from the wisdom of a woman who has made peace with the past, and is ready to embark on a journey to her future happiness. I read it twice, and am going to keep it to remind me of what's important as well. Wonderful work Chanti. You never fail to inspire me. Much love from your friend Michelle|
|Reviewed by Edwin Larson
|This is beautiful, Snuggles !!!! If, as Kate said 'you are the captain and the crew' then I'm damn proud to be the pirate that plunders your treasures....Aye Cap'n Aye !!!!
The Notorious Commander Cuddlechops at your service mam !!
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Sails of love trimmed for venture and conquest of all of life's unforeseen and unknown peaks and troughs, this is a delightful avowal of commitment to the future and to forging a path of togetherness through it - notwithstanding ignorance or misunderstanding. Honesty is the vessel you sail in, Chanti, and, as such is pretty much unsinkable, whatever the weathers bring. I wish you sunshine and fair winds always, but also know that many waters are not crossed without the odd squall or two, for which you sound amply prepared! :)) You are both Captain and Crew and your voice in this most beautiful of love poems is assured. Just ADORE your penultimate stanza! Bless you both. Gorgeous pic. TY Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Mature and wisdom filled write, it shows deep strength of character and self belief.
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
I enjoyed the heart-song here!
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
When two hearts give each other the freedom to spread their wings, the sky is endless, the horizon beautiful and the two soar as One.
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|yes...no logic; no certainty. so very well written.|
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Excellent poem Chanti, so much of what you written has a deep resonance with me. Once again things didn't turn out for the best in my latest romantic endevour. However, there is much I can take from your words. All the very best to You and Eddy, I hope the future is filled with joy and happiness for you both.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|spirited and nourishing ...|
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|Funny how, as TOGETHER NOW points out, love insists on being its own logic and passion refuses to dress itself up in reason. A great read.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
Enjoyed this one
Love & Peace
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|The choices we make is a word in each of these lines. Universally, our attitudes and actions combine to form your sentences, Chanti. You've allowed our collective characters to create paragraphs which quickly grow into pages and chapters of our lives. Together Now is something I would like to carry with me through the storms of life. A validating, well-qualified poet we have in you, Chanti!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Very sweet and wonderful musings for a person in love and looking forward to what love and loving offers in a world to oftrn cold.
|Reviewed by Betty Torain
|I like this POEM. I think love is always a leap of FAITH & TRUST.
I like the word NOW in your writing. All we have is NOW.
Thanks for sharing, Betty Torain.
|Reviewed by A PAX
|This has melody, very touching, and to me.........positive
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|"There is no logic in love
no reason to be found in passion"
I find these verses particularly "real" but the whole poem is soul-stirring, Chanti. Thank you for sharing your sentiments via your verses. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|Well expressed, my friend.
Hugs to you,