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|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|THIS is very good.|
|Reviewed by Jane Rodway
|The line about the door, really makes this poem hit hard, and the way you set this up is good, giving power to the right lines.|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Awesome my dear daughter. I admire the review given by Sage. Her words have such intensity...no wonder her name is Sage.
Great and deep as per your way of thinking.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Mariah, this is such a sad write directly from a hurting heart, not quite broken but slowly dying all the same. YOu captured all too well what it is like to watch love die a slow lingering death.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|You have written this in the best way. I like the ending the best.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Confronting existential moments such as break-ups, fear, and exhaustion lets us experiment with the feasibility of new experience as opposed to the feeling of inadequacy and the fear of failure. Many times Empty is the door that opens when another closes and is a creative product of paintings, writings, films, designs, pottery, theories, and other artistry. Wait no longer, Mariah, creativity awaits!