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A Kodak Moment by Susan K. de Vegter Sunday, May 21, 2006 Rated "PG" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan

You stand there on the mossy ground a dampness in the air You can't believe this feeling...the surgence of a dare You look over your shoulder as if to witness me I wasn't there just then my love...as now, I am...to be Your eyes they search the camera lens, a sideward glance of charm A look that bids the me to dance and flow within your arms The wish is there when I was here...the faith was born affaire' You stood on mossy ground just when, I am...but wasn't there I'm in the bid your eyes did claim...I dwelt inside your heart I was the one that hummed in you not just a friend or lark I am...I say...I will with you, I can redeem your love I shall lie in you til then...when pushing comes to shove You stand alone but in your eyes...my shadow sways to dance It was ago when you stood there and offered up the chance Come here you bade the camera bold...come whomever you be Come take this pain and offer up the chance to love with me I did then and since my love...I dwelt inside your soul And now you come alive for me and in my heart you fold You're who I need...the one I pine and yearn and ache for years The difference in the heart of old and now the new is here. � 2006 Susan K. de Vegter

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull	5/21/2006

Had to be there. Had this Kodiac moment once myself. I was in the Alaska wilderness and... The camera sees what's in your soul? Ron




Reviewed by Felix Perry	5/21/2006

Gripping and interesting write looking back at the way love develops and the comparison of the captured picture frames to captured sensations of desire is creative and filled with passion. Wonderful write my dear friend. Felix




Reviewed by E T Waldron	5/21/2006

The heck with kodack this is a SUSAN moment! you always make the best poetic pictures!;-) Love, eT




Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)	5/21/2006

Sentimental writing at its best. You da one!




Reviewed by Ron Dondiego	5/21/2006

Thank you Susan, this was a lovely offering to the realm of poesy. It's a good heart to dwell in ... Ron




Reviewed by Peter Paton	5/21/2006

You capture the moment perfectly, Susan... Magic moments frozen in time... Peter




Reviewed by Ed Matlack	5/21/2006

A truly developed style you have Susan...Ed




Reviewed by George Carroll	5/21/2006

A snap shot of life. Well done Susan.