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I'll Never Fall In Love Again ( Jerry's Challenge )
by Peter Paton

Monday, May 22, 2006
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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" "The course of true love never did run smooth". .......William Shakespeare

............................................................................................

 

I'll never fall in love again

for I don't want to feel the ache

of a broken heart ever again

and I don't want to see falling stars at night

or make wishes on the magical moon no more

cuz my heart has been broken so many times

leaving me all tender and hurt  inside

and all my rainbows are weeping in the sky

for my precious dreams

have been shattered like glass

with all my whispered secrets

dissolved like melting snow

for my golden sunsets

have been turned to blue

and the world has stopped

turning and revolving for me

and I just can't understand

why this heart of mine

still beats for you

 

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006
I'll Never Fall In Love Again ( Jerry's Challenge )
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Reviewed by A. Santo 5/27/2006
Emotions change so rapidly in the soul. But the ones we nourish most are the ones that direct our thoughts, words, and actions. Love does test the character of the heart. But it is the heart that carries the final balancing of Love. The ache here is obvious. The longing palpable. True love is NEVER forgotten in the memory of who we are, no matter how distant or near it may seem. :)
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 5/23/2006
Well we do seem to think of love as spectacular emotions and heroic acts for the beloved! The best love relationships are built up like a fine lacquer finish and many accumulated layers of the heart, Peter. The roots of the deepest love die in the heart if not tenderly cherished. You did Jerry's challenge well!

Sage
Reviewed by Janet Bellinger 5/23/2006
I really like the rhythm and form of this one, Peter.
Reviewed by Regina Pounds 5/23/2006
ah, Love and all it entails...excellent, Peter...

Gina
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook 5/23/2006
I'm so glad Susan tells us this one is fiction
for it aches with pain.
Reviewed by richard cederberg 5/23/2006
Been there and done that too many times in my life Peter. Just a horrid desert to be stuck in without water. This dredged up a lot of old memories.
I believe it took guts to write this.
Blessings and Regards
Richard
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 5/23/2006
This is just heartbreaking, but excellent for the challenge (why did we not think of something like that?). A life without love, without the prospect of love, a gutwrenching thought..
Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by jude forese 5/22/2006
even though your heart aches, you are alive ... always give love another chance ... its possibilities are endless ...
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 5/22/2006
Excellent heartfelt offering!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Nordette Adams 5/22/2006
You've written my refrain here, Peter. This is sweetly romantic despite the aching. ~~Nordette
Reviewed by A PAX 5/22/2006
Straight from the gut........but with grace and class
pax A
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 5/22/2006
This is great Peter
God Bless
Michelle!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 5/22/2006
Thanks for giving it a try. Very nice god, buddy.
Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia 5/22/2006
...I'm not aware of the challenge, Peter, but you are so adept with the flourish of your pen, and the purity of your heart, that I know not, how any could come away after reading it...and NOT want to...go fall in love! how can one be alive, if one is averse to the truth of joy and sorrow, pain and release? No matter, what the challenge, you have triumphed! Bon vivant, mon ami! love ~ rhonda
Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader) 5/22/2006
(( Peter ))) this ones a gem of a write..Thanks for sharing it..

Love & Healing, Dove
Reviewed by Felix Perry 5/22/2006
Tender write and full of the pain love has caused you, however love still survives and without it how humdrum our humble lifes would be.
Felix
Reviewed by Huda Orfali 5/22/2006
Oh Peter
There is no fun in life without the shooting stars and broken rainbows.
I'd rather see a broken rainbow than no raninbow at all
Courage my friend
No need for tears
Beautiful poem, partner :)
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/22/2006
Excellent write, Peter; very well done! Challenge very well met; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 5/22/2006
Knowing you as well as I do and knowing the great love you share with your wife and family you did Jerry's challenge very well. While reading this poem I almost got lost in the emotion as though you were hurting but....I know better than that.
Love it Peter!
Susan
Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson 5/22/2006
Outstanding write Peter, for often is the thought…tis better to have never loved and lost…bravo
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/22/2006
Peter, Such a fantastic poem,capturing love lost in a most beautiful way and the challenge well met!


eT
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 5/22/2006
Dear Peter,

I'm not familiar with Jerry's challenge (will catch up later) but your poem is like pain wrapped in beauty. Weeping rainbows «-- this image is brilliant and I love it!

Love & Light,
Joseph
Reviewed by George Carroll 5/22/2006
We sure can punish ourselves. Tongue in cheek answer to Jerry's challenge, nicely portrayed.



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