by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Monday, May 22, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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The air is greasy,
thick with humidity;
s t i l l n e s s rules the late
distant thunder rolls
with a lover's message;
darkness falls ...
The smell of ozone drifts
through open windows;
drum a song on the
roof, keeping time to the
We make love to the
patterns of lightning and
thunder ... keeping time,
our own storm ... after
the ride is over, we
will ride the whirlwind
back to Earth.
(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.
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|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|most outstanding offering!!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|I'll never view a thunderstorm the same way ever again, Karla; excellent and clever write! BRAVA; keep 'em coming! Very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
Love, Birgit and Roger
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Steamy and delicious Karla!
love and peace, Carole
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Riders on this storm...|
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|In your well chosen words, you know reveal WHY you folks out there are having so many earth shattering storms and disturbances! Now, for gosh sake, slow down, and let those whilwinds settle down to only tornadoes. . .
Good job, here..... - Bill
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
A beautiful poem here, keep up the great work
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Ride that whirlwind, might be better than a rollercoaster...Ed|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Superb poem Karla! Love the word usage!
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Fun energy that you lasso with passion. I love a storm and a sultry drink of passion. Sexey verse here Karla.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|The masterlady of weather poetry strikes again with this eyeopening poem of the storm.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|exceptionally well written ... the storm within is microcosom of its outward splendor and fury ...|
|Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
|Karla, this is one of your best, dear...Excellent..
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
A very passionate and intense allegory of a striking thunderstorm from your accomplished pen...
Love and Harmony