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Connie Hinnen Cook

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Lady Esmeralda is destined for life as the adoring aunt for her sisters' children, since her own is plagued with a fluttering-eye syndrome that sends any prospective inte..  
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If you were a channel I'd change you
If you were TV I'd hit Mute
If you were online I'd erase you ~
Backspace - delete - and kaput!

Made me think you'd be my sunshine
you turned out nothin' but rain,
Made me think you'd be my refuge
you turned out nothin' but pain.

Right from the git-go you knew it
I learned my lesson and how ~
Chance of a lifetime, you blew it:
Mr. Right? ~~~ Mr. Right Now!


"Except the LORD
build the house,
they labour in vain
that build it"

(Psalm 127:1 KJV)

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Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Exceptionally done!
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
There are sure more Mr. Right-Now out there than Mr. Rights, a good point in a charming message!
Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Clever, succinct and meaningful, Connie. Thank you. Love and peace,

Reviewed by Linda Ames
well said! and though it speaks to a common theme, i found it amusing in your choice of words. clear and clever.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Awwww! Hope you'll feel better soon...

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by E T Waldron
YOu are a fatastic poet Connie! Can I borrow you;-) This may be sad, but you are so with it, I know all will be well!

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell
That's kickin' him square.
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Connie it is unfortunate that sometimes we meet and become attracted to a-holes but hopefully we find out before it goes to far. Love your strong statement.

Reviewed by A PAX
very good rant Connie
very clever
to bad he turned out to be.......what he chose to be

Reviewed by George Carroll
Good that you didn't have to waste your time before finding out he was a stiff. Love the Psalm.
Reviewed by Peter Paton
Again it reminds me of my Mum's famous words...
" All Men are Bastards "....
Gotta love it !
Reviewed by Gordon Rosenberg (Reader)
erase, erase, erase...
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Uh, Connie, you need to quit holding things back. You should really try to express youself a little better. Come on, you can do it, just tell us what you really think about the bastard! LOL Gotta love it.
Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Do what I do, I tear up pictures..he he

xxx dove
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