|Reviewed by Jennifer Croy
|An excellent poem well written from you. I found it truly inspired by you. Keep up the good work! Jen|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|That's life--that's what all the people say. The devil made me do it? No Way!
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|And thus abortion was born.|
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|You do like to stir things up... ad down... the beach, and all over the place! Don't bring that feller to the mountain; you and he would be arrested for lewdness, whateverthehelll that is. Good writing, talented lady. Proud of you. - Bill
|Reviewed by Huda Orfali
|Powerful images and great write
thanks for sharing
love and peace
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Great imageries and feelings. Passions well-told!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
|Well told and written dear Susan!
A wonderful dance in itself.
Thank you for sharing something we all share.
Love, Suzie :-D
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Agree with Jerry, sounds like fun, but we know the consequence if we ever do, when you read Jay's poem!Great write Susan! Love the art!;-)
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Haha!!! Gotta love it. Yep, have more fun dancing with the devil than the parson down the road. Well, on second thought . . . Another juicy one.|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Great Write On -Scary Photo...
|Reviewed by A PAX
There are so many lines here and phrasing that just blew me away, you are very gifted and have a fantastic way with words
this is a keeper
the passion is so picturesque, I want to blush ;)
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
My mum always told me, he or she who dances with the devil, pays the piper's tune....
When we live on the edge, we are likely to fall over the abyss..
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|The white cape of celibacy knows no need. The red cape seduces the balefire where the horn and y conjoin in cutting the brake lines and the fluid spills in the Devil's moonlight! My toe has been on that line in the sand, Susan!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Ahh but what a delicious and warm embracing dance he offers, and what a fool we are to waste youth on the young who can't fully appreciate all of the steps. Your images were so clear felt like I was sitting in the dunes watching their movements in the night.