in a single breath the other me turned on
I was sitting on the balcony
admiring my greener grass
that had been induced into
an artificially, but lovely color
after a friend insisted he fertilize it for me.
the sun was reflecting off the lake -
glistening orange, red and purple sunset skies.
the cats were on the prowl for lizards.
and in the distance of one breath,
while searching in my heart for you -
yes, after one inhale, and upon the next exhale,
I found you there - deep within my thoughts
where peacefully I was able to breathe in
an awareness of real love.
© 2006 sara coslett
Want to review or comment on this
Click here to login!
Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Peace on the Balcony, with glistening sunset skies - wonderful, Sara.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|beautiful, Sara! luv the imagery & atmosphere ...|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|What a very nicely worded poem of love. Thiss is just . . . good.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Now this is beautiful poetry! Good for you Sara!|
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|How wonderfully delicious you describe a most importnt incident. So good it took away MY breath... Thank you for this one. - Bill