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hurting souls
by Nathan Low

Friday, May 26, 2006
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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just something i was feeling at the time

release me from this pain,
i dont want to hurt,
it's suffocating hands,
can it get any worse.

i feel my spirit dying,
inside i can not grasp,
why is it escaping,
why do i deserve this task.

im stuck inside this dread,
without a hand to hold,
i want an angle to come,
and help release my soul.

please i beg of you,
answer this one prayer,
put an end to all this chaos,
i need someone who will care.


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Reviewed by June Thompson 6/10/2006
another great piece! I'm enjoying reading you- thanks for reading me, I think you DO know how much I appreciate it!

with love,
A
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/2/2006
A soul-reaching plea that cannot be ignored by your readers, Nathan. Check the typo "angle" in the third stanza. I know you'd do the same for me. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace,

Regis
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 5/30/2006
We fall into this at one time or another. Wonderful heartfelt prayer.

Welcome to AD!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)



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