|Reviewed by M Flack
|Soft tender tears felt for love lost without rhyme or reason...
Your words are tender and gently remind us of the love that lives beyond the grave. Thank you for sharing this promise of hope...
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|So sad and yet beautifully written!|
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|Sexy Susan can write deeply, when she has a deserving reason.
In this one, you've given us reason to pause and realize that death, especially, resulting from a, "Cause," IS the supreme sacrafice. For those who fell in our wars, you redeem our inadequacies !
Thank you, Susan. - Bill
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Colors of bravery cloak the pine as tears wash over his courage
Very powerfully penned, Susan.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|This heart wrenching epic fills the blank page like an artist fills a blank canvass. You have trapped the very essence of death, church and soul moving on to a higher realm and the choice of Ave Maria as a gathering word was excellant. Big poem from a big hearted lady.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|An expensive price, yet we keep paying it, and for it.
Very crisp and clear write..
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Oh my Susan! This one pierces the heart!Written with eloquence from the heart and soul!Kudo's!
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|A heraldic tribute to all those who have fallen. Such a powerful composition in such few words, Susan! Let freedom ring!
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Death is our destiny. It is what we do until that is up to us.
|Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
|A song from the heart for all who have fallen.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Not in this life time but surely in the next.|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|A very moving and touching memorial composition
Memories linger on long after the sounds of war and hostillities has ended !
Tremendous write Susan with superb graphic..
Love and Peace
|Reviewed by Huda Orfali
|Magnificent tribute to freedom and those who sacrifice for her sake
God bless you, poet
Thanks for sharing
love and peace