|Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
|Strong tribute excellently written. R|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thank you for sharing your powerful convictions, Michelle. I love the way you created this. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Agreeing with Sherry here, Michelle. This is like a rosary, a mantra. And, picking up on Ian's Blake, tis quite like a Jericho march, too, init? Cept the walls are designed to be upheld, rather than fall... A rallying cry that rouses and bolsters. Interesting and unique. TY Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
|Have you been reading Blake? Certainly seemed more like his Jerusalem than Ariel Sharon's to me. It would surprise a lot of people to learn Blake's Jerusalem has always been a favourite of mine. And then if I explained it everyone would be soooo disappointed.
Need I tell you I liked this?
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Excellent form and rhythm in this piece, Michelle. Like the beating of a drum of conviction, your words deliver a message that resounds in the soul. I don't know who this man is, but your words show your strength and support for his purpose.
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Interesting evolution of numbers in this construct.
4 stanzas, 4 lines each, eight Jeusalems, the first three stanzas have 18 words each, the last stanza has 19 words.
The numerical structure is what is most interesting about this.
The numbers hint at perfection in the offing, which as yet has not been fulfilled in its entirety.
The Spirit moved on you in this.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|I am ignorant of who this man is, but I sdmore your conviction and stand with you on the plight of the Jerusalem within us all.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|I like this one Michealle, it shows your courage of conviction and the belief in what you feel. The rhyming is great and it conveys the message you have hoped to capture really well. Great job.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Indeed, whatever it is, tough it out. Be 20 feet tall and strife, well that's a tiny pea waiting to be squashed.
Fr Adolf (unfortunate name) sounds like a wise chap..
Nicely measured, and sharply done.
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|A great profession of faith and trust in God..
Thanks for sharing
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Excellent and inspired. I'll pray with you!
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|A test of faith's endurance, Michelle. Priests and assorted clergy face enormous opposition from the people of many different lands. Today in Prayer encompasses we must remain iron-pillared and stand our ground. The religious leaders of this century have to be more courageous and inspiring. Blessed Be.
|Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
|Praise God, Michelle! And I stand with you, in defiance of the Enemy, to pray for the peace and prosperity of Jerusalem....God give them strength! And I shall pray for Father Adolf Occeno.
Bless you, lovely lady, bless you. love & prayers ~ rhonda