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Refined Time
by Suzie Palmer

Sunday, May 28, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Iím looking for refined time
Advanced, dignified, creation sublime

Looking, I am gaining rhyme by
Some reason to the state short of Divine

We humans seem to settle there
And live and give, surrender without care

Simply thinking we donít belong
In a reality where we get along

Instead we hold our heads down low
Rubbing shoulders in the undertow

If only we gave each other a fair go
We would lift one another to the Kingdom we sow



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Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi 6/3/2006
That's very true. Casual it it seems, it is absloutely true. People often seem to lack simple merits such as kindness and openness of the spirit. That makes them tormented and inspires hatred due to a distorted image they have of themselves. Every attitude, value or ethic is a means to an aim and must be -even in its exercise- understood as such rather than taken for an absolute size. Missing out on this awareness is the root of it all.
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 5/29/2006

Substantial contents in "Refined Time". I enjoyed the message.

Health and Creativity.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Peter Paton 5/29/2006
When we strive for the Kingdom, miracles start happening along the way, to guide us there...
Very thoughtful and contemplative narrative
Love and Light
Reviewed by Felix Perry 5/29/2006
Ahhhhh sweeeeet Suzie, good to see another of your fine writes and with such a real message that will no doubt inspire all. The images are crisp and clear and the simplicity is outstanding. Love this one Sue.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray 5/28/2006
You are truly an angel, sweet Suzie. You have been from the start but you affirm it strongly more and more each time I connect with you. Much love and peace to you and hope for healing for this place and time. Thank you. Love and peace,

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 5/28/2006

Anytime we condone anyone or anything that upsets harmony then we are partially responsible.

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay 5/28/2006
Very good.

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