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|Reviewed by Jane Rodway
|This is very powerful and sad-you showed the desperation of a suicidal person well, and the effects on those around them, when you feel as though there are no words to make things change in their mind, thanks for this, we need thought-provoking.|
|Reviewed by Chanti Niven
|Suicide is always such a tragedy and it is especially hard on those left behind. A poem filled with sad reflection.
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|I agree with Peter . . . very despairing indeed!
I don't feel adequate to review this piece. Perhaps anything that is said might nullify itself.
I will say however that searching for that which makes us whole has been the struggle of mankind from the beginning.
Your offering certainly reflects the spiritual war that all human beings endure during the extent of their turbulent lifetimes, and also the jaded wisdom we all tend to embrace at times, from those who purport to understand, to comfort ourselves.
If misery loves company, as the saying goes, then at times I am my own best friend!
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
A very sad and despairing poem...
We should always trust our gut instincts in life, and reject the dark with the beauty of light...
Life is an extremely precious gift which must be cherished and realized fully, if we are to be all.... that we can be...
Thanks for sharing
Love and Peace