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Wordsmiths Journey
by E T Waldron
Wednesday, May 31, 2006
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I slowly took the beam the sun
handed me and threw it across
the bow of the ship that was sailing
into the vibrant turquoise waters of
your cerebellum sea


Awash in the splendor of stimulating
thought, I sailed into the moodiness
of your matchless mind, knowing I
would find buried treasure more than
a benevolent booty


Invigorating phrases captured me while
verbs and nouns played tag with my
senses leaving me breathless as I tried
to keep up with the adjectives that made me dizzy


Seductive grey matter enticed my emotions with oceans of stimuli which caused a sweet syncopation that  joined rhythm and rhyme to produce poetic fusion to the exclusion of
all banality


We sailed on in the misty moonlight of verse luxuriating in the indigo night as stars shone bright upon our muse to infuse a myriad of bliss from the kiss of our first collaboration on into infinity


eT


 


 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull 6/4/2006
A nice poetic mix.

Ron
Reviewed by A. Santo 6/3/2006
Aye ;) and you are an extraordinary wordsmith that takes us all on magnificent journies. Lost at sea with your pen again...lol...thank you so much for your writing. Every poem is an adventure into your precious soul.
Reviewed by jude forese 6/2/2006
creative and captivating ... a journey into the realms of inspired thought ... i must say, your words are flawless and invigorating ...
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 6/2/2006
A most fantastic write!
B&R
Reviewed by William Bonilla 6/2/2006
An outstanding Piece Eileen
ejoyed your profound talent
Thanks for sharing

William
Love & Peace
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 6/2/2006
Orgiastic expression of mind, spirit and body in a swelling sea of words that is pulled by the tides of cognitive thought. Full-sailed and free-flowing. Passionate and fecund, Eileen, thank you. Kate xx
Reviewed by Duke LaRance 6/2/2006
Yowzah! This is great. It's too bad that the only part of my brain that's left is the "alligator" part.
Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine 6/2/2006
I particularly enjoyed the first verse, but the entire poem was enchanting. Excellent write. R
Reviewed by Janet Parker 6/2/2006
This is brilliant, Eileen. One of your best! xxxooo Janet
Reviewed by Gloria Buono Daly 6/2/2006
This is exceptional. Love the feelings of discovery and emotion. Thanks for sharing your amazing gift. My best, Gloria
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 6/2/2006
Beautifully composed, Eileen. Very much enjoyed the journey!
Peace,
Carolyn
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/1/2006
Your talent as a craftswoman of words shines throughout your verses, Eileen. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Brian Pellerino 6/1/2006
Tiger,

Oh yeah! Sweet and savory word buffet. I'm going back for seconds and thirds!

Peace,

B
Reviewed by George Carroll 6/1/2006
Your play with words is outstanding and comes from a fertile mind that has no equal.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 6/1/2006
Eileen,

The opening lines captivate and draw the reader into your journey...a most beautiful one, indeed. One of your best, thank you! Definately keeping. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader) 6/1/2006
ET, you my angel are a true poet, dear..You capture all the essences of visionary delights..

Xxx dove
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 6/1/2006
Fascinating wordplay, Eileen...a real keeper!
love and peace, Carole
Reviewed by Tracey Hardie 6/1/2006
Very cool write.. I enjoyed!
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 6/1/2006
This is a wonderful wordplay from a wise wordsmith who flys like the wind with creative genuis.
I love it!
SUsan
Reviewed by Dale Clark 6/1/2006
This is a great write Eileen. So outstanding!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 6/1/2006
Great write, Eileen; very well done! :)
Reviewed by richard cederberg 6/1/2006
"Your cerebellum Sea" & "seductive gray matter" certainly hints at the vast potential that lies in each one of us to use something finite to create and affect those around us with the sweet savor of infiniteness.

You are a prolific woman that stays true to her craft!

Richard

Reviewed by Ed Matlack 6/1/2006
I read this last night upon my arrival home from work, and then again this morning, and find it too perfect to remark with humor...it is again just perfection all around...this one for me is a keeper...Peace, Poet...Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 6/1/2006
lovely
Reviewed by Huda Orfali 6/1/2006
Captivating sublime write
thanks for sharing
love and peace
Reviewed by Nicoletta Poulakida (Reader) 6/1/2006
Hi Eileen, got myself a bronze membership and now I'll try to comment and read here and post my work, I'm glad I found you and others here again.
As always the imagery is vivid and your poetry well written.
love
Nicoletta
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 6/1/2006
Sublime writing to the nth is this one. Sudective grey matter, indeed.
Reviewed by Paul Williams 6/1/2006
Such enticement is hard to resisit, the collaboration with the grey matter is by far the best. Love it Eileen.

Paul;-)
Reviewed by Peter Paton 6/1/2006
Eileen
You give us all much needed lightheartedness and levity of mind with this sassy and sparkling composition
You are at your best in this divine mood, and I love your choice of superb graphics...
Love and Light
Peter
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 5/31/2006
You're back!
My favourite stuff when you share your most recent poems.
They are worth taking time over..
Sherry always crasps poems so excellently...
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 5/31/2006
Mentally and emotionally stimulating, I found your verse to be captivating, Eileen. It made me want to be adrift upon the sea, napping in the sunlight to the rhythm of the sea, without a care in the world.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Nordette Adams 5/31/2006
WOW! This is quite good, Eileen. Thoroughly enjoyed this poem. :-) And thanks for reading and commenting on my daughter's work. You're a good friend.
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