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Impatiently
by Theresa F Koch
Monday, June 05, 2006
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The trellis seems to be aged..


Yes! I am sitting here impatiently
Watching the snail-vine twist about
The trellis seems to be aged, bending
Spider webs float in the wind upon it

I wonder what it must have looked like
You know back when someone placed it
There in the garden now over grown
Paint is chipping off it but I see character

Bowing in the middle from carrying weight
It seems as though it will fall to the grass
But the bright green vines hold it in place
They caress and love it almost like a lover

I drift off past the vines to the dancing web
A lone spider repairs the netting knitting
Precise and intricate this lace shimmers
The trellis is their personal private planet

I feel as though I am a trespasser into their
Ever changing melodrama, me the giant peeks
Do they know or care that I watch their life
I wonder who watches mine, impatiently?

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Reviewed by Linda Roman
Well done! I enjoyed. thanks
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Very, very nice, indeed! I enjoyed!
Reviewed by A PAX
Oh my goodness

Interesting contemplations, representative of such much more

Intelligent musings, so far reaching

well done
pax A
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Write on!

TRASK
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
I'm too much of a realist and cynic to worry about if "they" know they are being watched and written about, but I am enough of a romantic to absolutely llove this poem of nature's voyeurism.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
This very insightful, Theresa; and it incites the reader to think. Well done. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Consumate skill weaving this beauty, Theresa; a joy to see, and to read; thank you!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Peter Paton
The observer becomes the observed.....:D
The spider weaves his web with consummate precision and skill...nothing is left to chance, and all the devices are primed and ready for use...
Theresa, we can learn so much from nature, and just by being in the eternal flow of the Universe we can achieve all our aims and aspirations.
Wonderful, metaphysical write..
Peter
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Interesting ending question to an experience of where the mind wanders as it observes life as it is.
Reviewed by jude forese
insightful observation detailed brilliantly ...
Reviewed by E T Waldron
This is a fantastic poem TJ! Those last few lines really make it soar! I love the descriptive work ,like a word painting, the images are great!Good to read you again!

Love,
eT
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
You have left the poem with a good question.

The most important thing is that you have observed the spider's and you see that it's repairing its web. What skills it takes for the spider! Sometimes, it does need a good observer to appreciate what the spider has weaved.

A wonderful poem! Thank you for sharing!

~ SMA

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Teri, your works is always excellent..

Xxx dove
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