|Reviewed by darmok jalad (Reader)
|Pure genius Patrice; this is not retreat but superb offense; to be elemental is to be the earth herself.
|Reviewed by email@example.com Bennett
|Your poetry gives on so m uch meaning that you have to recieve positive feedback from all that review. Thanks for sharing with me and many others here on the lovely Den.|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|This construct is filled with the mysteries of suffering.
To resupinate as a bauble to adorn the ear of another must be humiliating, especially when you see it for what it is.
"Tasting stones to conjure your return" is certainly true to your thought-provoking style - so obvious, yet so utterly mysterious.
"sheathe of water cascading" leaves the head scratching reader with the feeling that, through it all, you are growing in ways never dreamed, flowing down and away into another season where suffering becomes beauty.
Hats off to you Pataliyah
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Browning as in dying
like the life of a leaf in the fall
what once was verdent and full of promise falls to the ground???
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
It's good to see you standing up for yourself...
No woman should be a doormat for a man...