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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/9/2006 |
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A hot one. Analogy at its finest.
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
6/8/2006 |
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"An iron would be much cooler
Than a heart whose core can burn" seethes with a powerful emotion Susan.
I was taken in by this intrepid write!
Well done!
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
6/8/2006 |
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oustanding write Susan
Love truly hurts don't it?
enjoyed reading your fabulous work
William
Love & Paece |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell |
6/8/2006 |
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The title grabbed me and the poem is well written and very much alive.
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/8/2006 |
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YES the similarity is there for sure and as Johnny Cash once stated in song "Love...is a burning thing, and it makes, a firery ring" so no denying the man in black or the master romantic my good friend Sue. Well done sweetie.
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
6/8/2006 |
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Oh so true! But not to risk being burned, what joy could be missed. Pain is the price of anything gained, it seems. At least for a person who lives life passionately. Very well written and expressed!
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/8/2006 |
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| Woe to those who break a heart. Well done Susan. You put it in a perspective that I could never do. |
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| Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader) |
6/8/2006 |
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Yes, I'm with everyones comments, Susan..Powerful..
Love & Peace, Dove |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
6/8/2006 |
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The heart is the center of our feelings and sentiments...and as such it burns like a wildfire...
Great analytical poetry , Susan..
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
6/8/2006 |
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| I believe too, Susan. While you can burn yourself with that iron, if you get too close to a heart you have burned sometimes the result is on the violent side. Tread lightly would be my advice. Excellent poem for the naive. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/8/2006 |
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Oh my Susan, yes the core of the heart seethes with passion
and you tell its story so well! Poetry to fire up all our engines!
Write on wordsmith!
Love,
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