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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
6/21/2006 |
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| good one |
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| Reviewed by Gloria Buono Daly |
6/13/2006 |
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| This is so cute and hilarious. Who would ever imagine a story about being mooned by a passin skunk, etc., can be so engaging and enjoyable. Loved it. My best, Gloria |
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
6/10/2006 |
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Original...actually, unique voice...cool tale, hilarious, and if you like: poignant.
Cool Stuff, dear A Pax
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/10/2006 |
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| I've been both mooned, and sprayed, by a few passing skunks, and I wasn't even in Neverland!! Quite a poem, Anita! |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
6/10/2006 |
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| Visited Neverland on an acid trip once, but I returned with my name, my hair turned into a mane...(?) ed |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
6/10/2006 |
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You part with who you are <---- great quote...
lol i read it as netherland..lol poor ole dutch |
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| Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot |
6/10/2006 |
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Skunks are black and white, Neverland, hmmmmmm, ummmmm I am getting Jacko here, or maybe I ate something that made me wacko lol.
Top write here Pax, most intriguing.
Ch'erie |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
6/9/2006 |
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| Last stanza should be on a plaque. The whole poem is good, O' talented one. :-) And that skunk, great allusion to the b*tch slaps of life. ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
6/9/2006 |
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Superb whimsy Anita, once again you treat us to your unique humor and delivery of the moral tale. And you do it with such style. The title just rocks! LOl.
Paul;-) |
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| Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia |
6/8/2006 |
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| How very clever! You have a great sense of humor, and an excellent brand of rhyme. Thank you for the smiles! blessings ~ rhonda |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
6/8/2006 |
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Excellent piece Pax
Loved it
will read to my grandkids
a keeper
Love & peace
William |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
6/8/2006 |
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Goodness Pax . . .
Where in the world do these little gems come from?
I'm thinking you recieved some creative wisdom when you had dinner and wine with the grays on Thursday?
The last line Anita: "You part with who you are" to me changed the entire gist of the poem.
I became aware suddenly of life as a series of loses and how we often, to keep some semblance of sanity, have to laugh and shrug at the passing of time and what it does to our minds and bodies.
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| Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher |
6/8/2006 |
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A very enjoyable and excellent crafted poem!
B&R |
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| Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader) |
6/8/2006 |
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Nice poetry here!!!
Xxx dove |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/8/2006 |
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Unique and original, Anita; and I agree with Taylor, this is worthy of much more than a single reading. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/8/2006 |
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Whimsical and wonderful write (could even pass on some of the inferences to Michael Jackson's Neverland thats for sure.
Well done
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| Reviewed by Taylor Ryan |
6/8/2006 |
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Unbelievably clever...meant to be read and read again. I agree, asde from the immediately pleasurable reaction to this write, I do find some interesting commentary on man. You go girl!
Taylor |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/8/2006 |
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I agree with Jerry do a book! This is magical whinsical poetry with an underlying message to ponder! Your unique mind and humor are a treasure, Anita!
Ps Been meaning to tell you I'm so glad your son is home!Great news and please thank him for me for serving his country so well, under such confused and divided circumstances!There are many who appreciated it!
Love,
eT |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
6/8/2006 |
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"...and in the end, the love you take is equal to the love you make" seems to have the same meaning as I interpret this from the last line. Drifting has it's uses but taken to extreme leaves one at the mercy of everything and everyone around him. Still, as nothing is wasted in my opinion, he did come away with knowledge and certain skills tho he forgot his name. To me, this is a serious write about human nature wrapped in whimsy. A puzzle if you will. And maybe I'm not making any sense at all, lol. You are an original, Anita...
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
6/8/2006 |
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| You need to get all your wonderful, wacky stuff together . . . WITH ARTWORK . . . and do a book. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
6/8/2006 |
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Anita
Too funny...you have such a fascinating and highly original mind, that
you leave us all breathless in your wake..
Thanks for lightening up the Den tonite with this hilarious write...
" Mooned at by a skunk ".....lols
Where's that clothes peg !!
Peter |
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