|Reviewed by April Smith
|This is beautiful...the miracle of life! Thanks for sharing, April|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
You give a quiet yet powerful voice to those who cannot speak for themselves. Bless you.
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by Huda Orfali
|What if the seed was not fertilized with love?
What if it was feritilized with rape and hate?
What about my mummy?
love and peace
|Reviewed by Nicoletta Poulakida (Reader)
|Indeed as Robert said, an important reminder,
|Reviewed by jude forese
|an important reminder to protect the unborn ...|
|Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
|A compelling and genuine tribute to life from the perspective of the unborn,"the nucleus of development in complete perfection...created by the creator in wondrous form"... Magnificent phrases,powerful message.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|A great statement on behalf of those yet unborn and waiting there turn to explore the world.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Quite a poece of indepth poetry, Peter. I liked this because your tone was exactly right, you sspeak for the ones that cannot sopeak for themselves. Three cheers. Hear, hear. Bravo!|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Awesome exposure for life and the reason to love. I am an advocate for the living and the right to be born to this earth. This is touching.
Thank you for writing this Peter.
|Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor
|Awesome appeal for the right to be born. Great write, Peter.|
|Reviewed by Jennifer Croy
|Peter, lol excellent poem written by you. I love the flow of your work on I want to live. And thank you on your reviews on my work. I hope I have what it takes to become an excellent writer one day. I wrote a book to be published for children "Delaphina the dancing ballerina" I hope readers will like it. Jen|
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|I've lost many a babe. I know the shadow cast by their absence. I have learned the sacredness of life and this is a wondrous write, Peter. But what would you say to a nine-year old girl who was a victim of incest and pregnant? A chronically ill woman who would die carrying a child? Would you allow a woman's embryo growing in a fallopian tube to continue to grow and kill her? What of a mentally challenged woman victimized by rape? These are the questions that plague my mind. With respect...
|Reviewed by bluecornflower orangetiger
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|Peter, that is a wonderful expression in the protection of life, never seen it done better,
|Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
|((((Powerful sentiments, Peter )))
I feel extremly proud to say all life whether it's in the womb or born is SACRED.... All life feels, all life see's, all life dreams for a better life... We are the miracles God has made. My prayers have always been to support the life of the unborn, they are the most innocent ones. And so I pray a day comes soon where all life will be safe by law in every state. Your a true humanitarian for justice for God's children..Your rewards in Heaven are so many Peter...Keep teaching truth, justice, divinity and social causes for peace on mother earth.
Peace & Love, Dove
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thank you for sharing this ode to the preciousness of life, Peter. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Oh Lord Peter!
What a powerful call to remember the delicate fields from which we all sprung.
Bcause of these heinous acts, done in the name of mammon and free will, there will be a reckoning someday for all the wanton death of the innocents.
This was very touching and, I imagine, deeply felt in the penning.
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|That's so sweet and so true.
|Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
|The most glorious and far-reaching dedication to LIFE and the SANCTITY OF LIFE, that I have come across, Peter Paton! You are such a born leader. Like The Christ, I Praise God YOU were born unto us, my Valiant Crusader! BE SAFE OUT THERE! love ~ rhonda|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
What a powerful, compelling poem! Thank you on behalf of the unborn, who have no voice in the matter. You and Michelle Kidwell can change the world with writes like this; well done! The last stanza particularly effective.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.