|Reviewed by Chanti Niven
|I was inspired by Kate to read and I'm so glad I did. Incredible abstract poetry.
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|I pulled this up after reading Kate's poem this morning...and I'm very glad that I did! This is absolutely remarkable...a treasure...and Kate is right, it is an example of how to write poetry.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|brilliant, Debs ...|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Symbolic and powerful in meaning expressed. Thank you for sharing this offering, Debs. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|TOTALLY BRILLIANT in concept and execution, Debs. Am saving as an example of how to write poetry... a unique idea conveying a mind-expanding essence that is rooted and grounded in the tangible and expressed with minimal effort for maximum effect... makes me realise I have along way to go. Thinking now about what Nicoletta has said about it being "finished" (... are they EVER??!!), I think that possibly I might be tempted, had I written this (which I never could!), to go EVEN BOLDER and delete line 2; perhaps the fact that he is going "to dream", followed by references to morning and evening says enough? Just moving in on the debate, here, which I know you appreciate. Something this good deserves close scrutiny. Bless you and thank you. Kate xx|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|This is a very beautiful vision!
|Reviewed by Missy Cross
|This is just gorgeous.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Your poetry is so unique and contains such excellent imagery, I loved this:
A man pastes honey on his eyelids
before going to bed
to dream ants and spiders.
In the morning his eyes weave
webs of silver and gold,
his mind stretches wings.
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar
|Nicoletta, I think it is complete. I know you may question some enjambment decisions. But it is already sent, and I may have to remove this post from internet (soon).
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|A wonderful and delightful poem.
Best wishes always
|Reviewed by Nicoletta Poulakida (Reader)
|Debashish, this is quite good, I think that it's not ready but then again maybe it's just me. Perhaps because it's going to be published (printed?) I hope you are sure it's finished. Cheers,
|Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
|A beautiful poetic breath!
Thanks for sharing this mystic gift.
Love & friendship Suzie :-)