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Debashish Haar

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Golden Cage
by Debashish Haar
Thursday, June 08, 2006
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A man pastes honey on his eyelids
before going to bed
to dream ants and spiders.
In the morning his eyes weave
webs of silver and gold,
his mind stretches wings.

Each evening flying
with the birds his mind enters
itself in a golden cage lit
by honey lamps.



*to be published in the Manifold Magazine of New Poetry*

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Reviewed by Chanti Niven
I was inspired by Kate to read and I'm so glad I did. Incredible abstract poetry.
Chanti
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
I pulled this up after reading Kate's poem this morning...and I'm very glad that I did! This is absolutely remarkable...a treasure...and Kate is right, it is an example of how to write poetry.

Susan
Reviewed by jude forese
brilliant, Debs ...
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Symbolic and powerful in meaning expressed. Thank you for sharing this offering, Debs. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
TOTALLY BRILLIANT in concept and execution, Debs. Am saving as an example of how to write poetry... a unique idea conveying a mind-expanding essence that is rooted and grounded in the tangible and expressed with minimal effort for maximum effect... makes me realise I have along way to go. Thinking now about what Nicoletta has said about it being "finished" (... are they EVER??!!), I think that possibly I might be tempted, had I written this (which I never could!), to go EVEN BOLDER and delete line 2; perhaps the fact that he is going "to dream", followed by references to morning and evening says enough? Just moving in on the debate, here, which I know you appreciate. Something this good deserves close scrutiny. Bless you and thank you. Kate xx
Reviewed by richard cederberg
This is a very beautiful vision!
Richard
Reviewed by Missy Cross
This is just gorgeous.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Your poetry is so unique and contains such excellent imagery, I loved this:

A man pastes honey on his eyelids
before going to bed
to dream ants and spiders.
In the morning his eyes weave
webs of silver and gold,
his mind stretches wings.

Outstanding Debs,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Debashish Haar
Nicoletta, I think it is complete. I know you may question some enjambment decisions. But it is already sent, and I may have to remove this post from internet (soon).

D
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
A wonderful and delightful poem.
Best wishes always
from
kay
Reviewed by Nicoletta Poulakida (Reader)
Debashish, this is quite good, I think that it's not ready but then again maybe it's just me. Perhaps because it's going to be published (printed?) I hope you are sure it's finished. Cheers,
Nicoletta
Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
A beautiful poetic breath!
Thanks for sharing this mystic gift.
Love & friendship Suzie :-)
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