|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
|There no greater feeling than that kind of anticipation, ET. Oh wow...does this one touch the senses and the sensual. Forget the evening, ET..it works any time of the day, LOL...and so vastlky so that the imagnation almost hears the knock before it comes. I loved this ET...more, more!
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|The sensual anticiption in this steamy write is palpable...fabulous piece Eileen, a keeper!
love and peace, Carole
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|And that door opens at just the right moment, passion and lust intertwined in this one to make for sensuous poetry.|
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Marvelous poem, like a dream you wake up,when you finish reading it. GBQ and your family and friends|
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|No one says it quite like Eileen, you reel me in Milady.
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|ah, the power of anticipation!
great write, Eileen.
|Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor
|Beautifully written, Eileen. One yearns with you.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|wonderful poem ... makes the reader's heart soar ...|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|You could have ended this poem with the first stanza and it would have been complete...The rest of the poem floats in like a dream in a half sleep where longing and desire paint a portrait of love. Beautiful work.
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Quite a romantic flow you have going here, eT. :-) Smooth as silk.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|The romantic in you shines in this write.|
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|A sensual fast moving poem which made me hot and steamy,I am jealous as there is no reason here to 'hold back the night.'
My favorite lines were :'My heart fiercely keeping its beat
Resisting the onset of evening
I try to hold back the night'
and also the lines I wish I had written were:'Lazily fondling each other until you rise again
To take me once more to higher realms
Finally... the door opens, you are here...'
Wow,a wonderfully sexy write!
Love to you and yours always
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|you are such a romantic lady, Rufuz is getting all turned on & wants to meet you...;) rufuz & ED|
|Reviewed by A. Santo
|True romance. Recognizing the burn in your heart is real and holding true to the vision of things to come is all that is required to reach the ultimate source of our hearts desire. Beautiful writing. :)|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|I'm always miffed. How do you do this with such consistancy...
btw, great to see dove back....
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|These are my thoughts too!
The picture looks like home. Wow!
|Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
|So beautiful..Thanks angel for sharing..!!
Peace & Love, Dove
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
A breathtaking and stupendous ode to true love...
Can feel the yearning and craving throughout the thread of the poem...
Complete with superb graphic