|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh I think we all can relate!!
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|As you work it out with Whatzizname, be assured that this is very good poetry. Every element is present. I get the tingles reading it. - Bill
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Not selling oneself short!
So much said in such short poignant prose.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|your passion's pride is certainly not a loser ...|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Interesting plea, this passion's pride, be.
|Reviewed by Edwin Larson
|Sounds like a match that's not meant to ignite. Take care.
|Reviewed by A PAX
|What a spot to let yourself get into
such is life, sometimes we are pushed into a cornor
not of our own creation, but of circumstance
And to retain pride, no mater what label it falls under
is in itself a badge
here's to sweeter noises
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|This expresses so well how each and every one of us need our own sense of identity and with it our pride in ourselfs and who we are. The old saying pride before the fall may apply to the receivor of your message, but I think it is a message you needed to convey.
|Reviewed by Shoma Mittra
|This is powerful and profound.
'You lose me in the noise
of your self-important life.' So many of us can relate to that.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This is a real dichotomy. no heart and pride not a good partnership.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Powerful kick in the soul write, Sara. I can relate. I appreciate. Love and peace to you,