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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
6/15/2006 |
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Susan - This poem is so overwhelming in so many ways. I fiand that I cannot find words to say any more that that. This is one of your milestone works. I congratulate. Get it published in the best of places! - Bill
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/13/2006 |
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awesome poem that i relate to very much so ...
"I watch you staring into your dreams
Where they lead
I may never know
But I do know I am around you
Applauding
As I watch you bleed"
from "Watching You Bleed"
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
6/13/2006 |
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| Tremendous, Susan!! The re-awakening of love is such a frisson and yet also such a sharp pain as well, rekindling our blueprinted memory of our experience of love as we have known it before. Beautiful poetry... I can never get over how you achieve so much in such short lines and in your inimitable dense and compacted style... whilst yet maintaining such delicious rhythm and flow. Truly lyrical and classically epic this is. A wonderful moment to savour when past, present and hope for the future are brought together in one inner Big Bang of realisation. All of life and love flashes before the eyes here. Longingly lovely. TY Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by A. Santo |
6/12/2006 |
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| Once a heart has been hurt the scar remains. And yes, from that moment on the soul begins to question, sort and seperate the ideas of what true is and what true love is not. How else do we learn unless we question and measure? |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/12/2006 |
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Because you are there. The sea of moods includes longing, and you can't hold back its constant washing on your shore.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/12/2006 |
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| Quite a powerful ending here, Susan. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/12/2006 |
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Ahhh so painfully passionate, that I just want to reach through the screen and hold you till your pain subsides. Very well done Susan Kathryn.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
6/12/2006 |
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| Listen in the stillness. Ask for nowt. He knows what you need without asking.. |
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| Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader) |
6/12/2006 |
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Amazing...
Xxx dove |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/12/2006 |
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You ask the questions that probe deep enough to show how many times those who come haven't a clue! Sis I wish we knew where the ones that know are!;-) Superb write as you always do,stirring all the senses!
Love and Harmony,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
6/12/2006 |
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| What a searching and asking poem. A poem full of hope and wonder and mystery, which added together make for one hell of a premise for a poem a short story, even a novel. Damn! Liked this one. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
6/12/2006 |
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Susan
These are the inponderables and mysteries of love...
As the Good Lord says to his faithful and suffering servant
" My Grace is Sufficient for Thee "...
Love and Blessings
Peter |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/12/2006 |
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| Ahhh I felt this one way down deep. |
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