AuthorsDen.com   Join (free) | Login  

   Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    eBOOKS new!     BOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    EVENTS    VIDEOS    GOLD    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Paul Kyriazi, iOralya Ueberroth, iPatti Bengen, iFrank Bosworth, iGeorge Cunningham, iChris Efessiou, iKaren Stokes, i

  Home > Romance > Poetry
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

Peter Paton

· Become a Fan
· Contact me
· Success story
· Books
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 544 Titles
· 6,738 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with a friend
· Add to Favorites
·
Member Since: May, 2004

Bookmarks
Add this page to
your Bookmarks List
 
Peter Paton, click here to update
your web pages on AuthorsDen.com.



Featured Book
Aubade(Morning Song): The Belltower of Old DeLand
by Michael Guy

Aubade, means "Morning Song" in Spanish I think. Whatever these 3 piano solo pieces were composed just after I returned from NewYorkCity around 1986 and was living in wha..  
BookAds by Silver
Gold and Platinum Members




   - eBooks
   - Marketplace
   - FaceBook





Popular
Poetry
(Romance)
  1. Reading You Again
  2. FACT 63: A Narrative Digression (part 3)
  3. Morning Coffee
  4. Rhythm of my Heart
  5. Love’s Vow Renewal
  6. Seducing Emotions
  7. A Lovely Rose
  8. A Beautiful Dream
  9. Hey There!
  10. Arms of Love
  11. Revolutionary Transformations
  12. Our World
  13. Final Sands of Time
  14. Sunset Love
  15. The Lion And The Lioness



Recent poems by Peter Paton
•  The Silent Flute
•  On Our Distant Horizons
•  The Law of Attraction
•  The Way We Were
•  The Ravages of Time
•  Catalyst
•  Soliloquy with My Mentor
•  Jubilation
•  Through the Eyes of a Child
•  Wall To Wall
•  Beyond All Expectations
•  The Spirit Incarnate
•  Permutations
•  Velvet Nights of Us
           >> View all 349
 

All or Nothing
by Peter Paton

Tuesday, June 13, 2006
Rated "PG" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Become a Fan



"Love is but the discovery of ourselves in others, and the delight in the recognition."
-Alexander Smith

.................................................................................................................. 

 

Your loving mind fascinates me, like a moth to the flame

 I find you absolutely charming, and you know you have this heart of mine

a soulmate divine, a trusted companion on the road of time

 you have captured my soul, and made my life complete

 we'll watch the raindrops glisten, on the golden privet hedge

and savor the sun kissed petals of an opening rhododendron

as I take your hand in mine, we'll link fingers so sublime

travelling joyously through the supreme garden of zen

exchanging the smiles of love, that are timeless as the stars

we'll take the enchanting path that leads, to the painted bridge of romance

on there we'll pause, as I take you close to me

inhaling your sweet breath, as our lips brush together in bliss

beneath the koi fish, are witnesses to our tender embrace

as we share the magical passion of our first glorious kiss

and I know I have fallen, for my heart is pounding hard

whilst your fingers trace my chin, I gently brush your lovely tresses

wishing these breathtaking moments will never ever end

our eyes locked together in the mesmerising trance of new love

a heady mix of passion, so deep and intense

as I whisper softly in your ear

darling I'm crazy for you

 

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006
  
All or Nothing

Want to review or comment on this poem?
Click here to login!


Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!




Reviewed by Linda Dousay 6/27/2006
Your loving mind fascinates me, like a moth to the flame
...
you have captured my soul, and made my life complete

I feel so inadequate to review...and can only quote the verses that have touched my heart and soul...This is beautiful...Linda
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 6/18/2006
Confessions of love in a Japanese tea garden--it doesn't get any better than this.

Ron
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 6/15/2006
Stunning offering Peter!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by richard cederberg 6/15/2006
Would all find this lovely place you have found with whomever this poem is for.

Peter - as exquisite and unique a creation as the image of that bridge is, so is your ability to reach deep inside one with your splendiferous constructs.

I raise my glass to you poet in respect and admiration!

Richard
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot 6/15/2006
A masterpiece of love in it's most tenderest expression.
Loved the pic too Pete, Ty for this wonderful write.

:) Ch'erie
Reviewed by Taylor Ryan 6/14/2006
Whomever has inspired this exquisite and enchanting verse must surely be allowed to read and learn full well of the heart she must possess and how carefully and delicately it is handled in word. Is it that you have known her through out time, or is it her smile and flirting eye, rhododendron's dew, or the promise of Zen's garden that leads you to that "first glorious kiss', that each one following will be the first again and taste as sweet? Me thinks they are well worth the "discovery" and a walk, fingers entwined over the bridge that links the two of them.
I add my own sigh and a swoon to all those on the list before mine.

xo Taylor ~

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook 6/14/2006
A romantic tribute to Love,
and left us all with a deep sigh.
So lovely!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 6/14/2006
Ah, this is so pretty, Peter! Very nice write; very well done! Good show!! :)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 6/14/2006
Dear Peter,

This poem is a bridge of romance that links your heart with your beloved.

Love & Light,
Joseph
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 6/14/2006
A truly marvelous romantic piece, Peter.
Reviewed by Suzie Palmer 6/13/2006
Dearest Peter,
Absolutely beautiful poem and dedication to your beloved!
Your union is a blessing!
Fantastic bridge complementing your poem's beauty!
Rumi said: "Judge a flame by the beauty of its moth" and oh your flame must be incredibly beautiful!
May your kisses be endless....
Love, Suzie :-D
Reviewed by A. Santo 6/13/2006
If ever there was hope in love, this is the very description of it. The tender embrace of united lovers is a dream the whole world shares in their secret sighs of the night. Fortunately for those of us who have found and know this divine attribute is true, your words appear as a testament of things to come. A planning if you will of the desires both the he and the she share. To stand on the sands of eternity and to look uncorrupted Love square in the eye is the pulse of Life itself. Amazing beauty captured in this glimpse of your soul. Who could possibly ask for more than this splendid day to arrive? "Not I" said the sky... :)
Reviewed by jude forese 6/13/2006
a passionate and highly romantic poem to your life partner ... top notch, Peter ...
Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/13/2006
Magic love poem coming directly from the heart. Beautiful and sweet write that the one you love will surely appreciate.
Fee
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 6/13/2006
So sweet and romantic, exciting and yet so very true. A wonderful write!
B&R
Reviewed by A PAX 6/13/2006
This is very romantic, visual
but most of all
there is a comfort and closeness here
as tho a couple have had a life before
in antohter time
and now its just old friends, saying hello again
lets fall in love
beautiful
and the photo as well
so peaceful
paz
anita
Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader) 6/13/2006
(((( Peter )))))

precious, precious man, this is no doubt the very best poem I have ever read of yours.. It goes through beautiful pieces of emotions the soul desires on earth, which is to be known, felt, adored, loved passionately and loved agape truest…Your strong ability to capture love at it’s strongest amazes me and you have the ability to go into powerful rays of love that we all dream of will happen for us in our life time.. When the soul finds love that rare, it has accomplished so much, Peter…Your powerful beautiful thoughts came rushing in and one that stood out the most was I got the name of Lion Heart in my mind…That is what I heard.. I remember your heart that stay close to purity, for they are the beauty, the essences of mercy, healing, wonders and grace from above. Hearts that are their purest have such depths of passion, for they know real love from imaginings…When I read the poem, I pictured the tin man receiving the heart, but the thing was Oz didn’t give anything to the tin man, that he didn’t already have. Remember that song?? Seals and Croffs… The tin man in The Wizard Of Oz. He thought he needed a heart and his heart was already profoundly open, towards the depths of love in it’s truest form, agape, love without any conditions, like Emmanuel, the Christ Lord Jesus, Messiah…..I see you as that man who has no idea just how powerful your love, your heart truly is.. I thought of you as that precious tin man, that already has a pure heart, that already has pure agape, pure spiritual love in it’s highest form.. You are that tin man that heart is purest than most hearts on earth. Oz knew you needed no heart , for yours was already a million times bigger than any one else’s heart…You, Peter have that rare soul of incredible gold. It is a heart that adores life, adores innocents, adores good will, adores love in it’s rarest form. God, this was a masterpiece just in emotions. A heart of yours that beats so powerful, so divine, that makes angels of glorious beauty blush. I am so overwhelmed by this stunning piece.. I am speechless. .Stay ever close to the light within, Peter.. Your a beautiful soul rare, rare, rare…
Love,
Dove
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 6/13/2006
My, my, my! How tender and utterly romantic, Sir! May your delirium never end!
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 6/13/2006
You have the heart and passion of love and it is true and dedicated. WOW!!! Your Heart is awesome and big enough for love to grow and grow. May you continue to gratify it with more and more...
Susan
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 6/13/2006
enjoyed the read
Reviewed by L. Figgins 6/13/2006
You are a sigh-maker, Peter. Passion! Sweet bliss. 'Nuff said. That quote is a keeper...

the "big sigh", Lin
Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia 6/13/2006
What an incredibly exquisite bridge...arced, just like your exquisite heart, Peter. Blessed is the lady who holds the key to that bridge!
Romantic...and sacred, at once. The quintessence of love.

Congratulations! ~ rhonda
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 6/13/2006
This is a beautiful write here, five stars for you and many blessings sent your way
God Bless
Michelle!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 6/13/2006
Gorsh, I wish I had somebody here to calll me "sweet man," of course if I could write like this I suppose that might just happen.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/13/2006
ohhhhh Peter, you make every woman wish it were her hearing that whisper and feeling thoses touches. Beautiful romantic poetry with the flavor of good old fashioned love, the kind that lasts. Thank you, sweet man!



eT
Authors alphabetically: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Bookmark this page to your Favorites
Featured Authors
| New to AuthorsDen? | Add AuthorsDen to your Site
Share AD with your friends | Need Help? | About us


Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
© AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.