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He Leaves
by Susan K. de Vegter

Tuesday, June 13, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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To percieve
He leaves
...She grieves

Su-san Kathryn de Vegter
copyright 2006

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull 6/18/2006
Let me know when he leaves--I comes. ;-)

Reviewed by . ignis 6/14/2006
These are words that reflect situations unknown to most. They are blessed to not have to endure them. At a certain point however enough is enough when preventing something to snap is no longer possible. There is a world of agony behind this brief expression.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 6/14/2006
Very powerful ...short but to the n luck....BHUWAN!!!!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 6/14/2006
Short. Succinct. Powerfully P E R F E C T! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by William Bonilla 6/14/2006
Short and awesome

Love & Peace
Reviewed by Peter Paton 6/14/2006
Very potent and intense ku...
I agree with Jerry and Trask
Keep on smiling...
Love and Harmony
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 6/14/2006
Most powerful, Susan, as is the graphic.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/14/2006
Brisk like iced tea and lemon this ku leaves the reader impressed with the sentiments it contains. Complimented by the graphic it has almost a spectral feel to it. As a writer the first thing that came to my mind was a writer pining the loss of her muse. Interesting to see how others "perceive".
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson 6/13/2006
succinct and potent. art is amazing. Dawn
Reviewed by Suzie Palmer 6/13/2006
Wow ... powerfully true it seems Susan!
6 penetrating words that find their mark!! Great image to complement.
Love, Suzie :-D
Reviewed by jude forese 6/13/2006
to the point! a sad perception indeed ...
Reviewed by A PAX 6/13/2006
We survive
We revivive
we're alive
pax A

you will be ok!!
his loss
Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader) 6/13/2006
Power in the ink...

Xxx dove
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 6/13/2006
For once I agree with Trash. Well, maybe for twice, whatever. Like they say, to prolong goodbye's is agony, or somthing like that.
Reviewed by A. Santo 6/13/2006
Disappearance goes hand and hand with desolation and despair.
That picture is a striking image to open the verse with.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/13/2006
Like a quick stab with a knife! Potent Susan!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 6/13/2006
Neat Write On --Now Whole Idea Is To Walk Away And Never Look Back!

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