|Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic
|Indeed we've all been there and done that..the problem is we're all STILL doin' it..hmmmmm
|Reviewed by jude forese
|bittersweat beauty! once our dreams burn we are left with their charred remains ...|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|So sad and yet so beautiful, writing magic!
|Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
|Ouch, the sting of betrayal...|
|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
|yes, a burning sensation, dearest Fee... almost like that of tears caught between the eyes and the throat, and then not flowing any further, to where soothing relief might be found.
many hugs and love, sweet man.
|Reviewed by A PAX
|all your poetry has melody to me Fee
and I think that makes it more powerful
this is short and direct
the emotion comes thru..........
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Oh rustles the leaves, Felix. Painful...
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|The past is gone and the bonfire of love has become ashes. Awesome depth to this pen in a painful way. You made it real in this verse and a little of my past slipped through.
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Sounds like a BBQ going on in your head Fee, crackle crackle,burn baby burn, in a different context.
Hmmm, Interesting write here.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|The burning leaves of autumn tossed has multiple meanings. Red, like fire, burned out and dead, and burned to be rid of them.
|Reviewed by April Smith
|Oh, this is so heartfelt...I can feel the pain of it. Very touching write. -April|
|Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
|Oh my God..I have BEEN ~ there done that!!! This Fee was powerful|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
Can feel the pain and anguish in this one
Reminded me of the Jim Reeves's classic " Today I burnt your old love letters "...