|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|No dimnished powers alluded to in this fine piece.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|We have to go and get life. It is what we make and do with it.
Hope you have heapsa sunshine
|Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Great title to a deep heartfelt poem that strikes the heart!
Deeply moving; as we move together and alone .. all one in our aloneness, learning immensely as we go.
Thank you for sharing your loving heart that unites.
Love, Suzie xoxx :-D
|Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
|If I didn't know any better Susan, I would have sworn you had taken this right out of my mind....
|Reviewed by A PAX
The ending made me gulp!!!
So sad, and so well written, art comes of pain sometimes, ain't it a bytch!
these lines hit home
As farrowed dreams paint fault
They bow to her fast sorrow
As her tears turn into salt
but beautiful expression as always..........
What you wrote on my last poem was so true.............
I am very quiet, but when I write, I can roar lol
or atleast try.
I am on my way to your daughters site,.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Hard poem to write because of the turmoil that produced it, but it reads like a forewarning to us all, that love can bend and hurt us, but never break.|
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|These words show your mastery of taking illusion and its many facets to the heights of beatuy, and to the lows of sorrow.
Well done in every line. - Bill
|Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
|Wowwww.. This was spiritualy illuminated Susan, TRULY... Your writes are deep within the soul level...Be blessed ~~
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Seems we were both looking back into our immortal pasts today but yours seems to have had a happier ending. Soon time for another little chat about this old friend.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Peter hit the nail on the head and I agree.|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
Some things are just not meant to be in this beautiful world..
We all have a role and part to play on the stage of life, whether thats minor or major depends on the card stacker !