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|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Ah Richard, so deeply powerful and haunting, this just got to me today, the past can haunt us, torment us, but in the end, the sun will rise and give us another chance at life. Excellent and so very poignant poetry.
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
When I know the "monster that i am" I can correct the course of my life and set the map of my angelical destiny... This "monster that i am" thought me a wise lesson... I enjoyed the reading of this poetic grand.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by J.A. Terry
|From out of the darkness comes a spark, which lights all of creativity.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|The past is just that. I only know you as you have worked hard to become, a very gentle, thoughtful, thinking, embracing soul.
You can't embrace the new paradigm unless you let go of the old.
|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|no monster, you...god, yes, it feels that way, i do know, and this, richard, painful, and dammit, you do know all too much that has been ingrained in you over years and years of the violence, yet your heart, spirit soar as you learn, and give, 'teach
mi amico, as f'ing dark, hard, painful and black-red raging pain, there, i know, i know...still, you keep on and on, seeking that solace that huge heart deserves...
piece hurts, it, it is painful and i know, in my way how it feels to be so 'lost', 'alone' and...well, you've opened your guts/heart up raw/beautifully here, still leaving us with the goodness you are!
it DOES live within you...the monster is the pain and memory and raging pain is so unbearable, yet, here you come through and give...
'all too human that you are'!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dammit, here ----> (((((r.)))))))
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Deep look to the self !!
Excellent and very thought provoking!!
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|this is exceptional, i especially like the form|