|Reviewed by The Smoking Poet
|Carolyn, this is masterful. The final line has just the right touch of that crucial a-ha moment, taking away the sting and shadow of death and instead giving it a touch of a lifting spirit.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A succinctly powerful tribute, Carolyn. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Beautiful inspired write, Carolyn! Always a pleasure to read you!|
|Reviewed by Arthur Tugman
|Carolyn, I enjoyed your poetry.
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|And we know not where the wind comes from, nor where it goes. A beautiful senryu tribute.
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Beautiful tribute Carolyn...
|Reviewed by jude forese
|ah, the beauty of the cycle complete ...|
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
In beauty building in "Transition" in the eternity of renovation.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most beautiful tribute!!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A very heartfelt tribute, Carolyn.|
|Reviewed by J M
|Oh the last line you are such an expert with this form. Thabnk you!|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Splendid tribute Carolyn!|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|When I die I want to hang on as long as I can, sucking up that fine prescription medication...then give me wonderment, as I will inside be totally fulfilled...Ed|