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D--n Straight
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Friday, June 30, 2006
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Honor those who paid the price for the freedoms we enjoy.

"Damn Straight"
There is a bitterness to your tears
as they
fall from the midst of your pain;
you ask,
'Was the sacrifice you paid worth it?'

There is a scared little boy inside
the man
I see before me; don't worry, I
won't leave.
I know you are hurting deep within.
A terrified little girl shivers
the woman in front of me; nothing
I do
can calm her fears...should we remember?

I honor you today, Veteran, and
thank you
and every man or woman who
donned a military uniform:

Damn straight.
(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by Miss Pandora 7/5/2006
A truly beautiful dedication. Panda
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 7/4/2006
Beautiful said, Karla. Every veteran will be loving it, every family member and friend of a veteran will be loving you for writing it.
Guess, we both love ya :0)
Love, B&R
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 7/3/2006
Karla this is a great write here, keep it up
God Bless
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/1/2006
You said it, Karla; you said it better than I ever could! God bless our men and woman in uniform and remember the sacrifices they made to ensure our freedoms! God bless you, and thank YOU for YOUR service! Very well done; brava!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Happy Fourth of July to you, and thank you for this reminder during this holiday! God bless America again!!!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 7/1/2006
Damn Straight, Karla, Damn Straight - And None of Us Should Ever Forget Them.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/1/2006
Thank you for sharing Karla!!

Love tinka
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 6/30/2006
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 6/30/2006
Thank you for this, Karla...your words are so true...freedom is not now and has never been free. We need to honor them every day of our lives because without them, we would be living a very different lifestyle to say the least.
Take care,
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 6/30/2006
You've taken the valor one step further to the secret child who faces war as a man/woman just beautifully constructed with your love.
I appreciate you Karla!
Reviewed by Taylor Ryan 6/30/2006
Value the inner child in all of us sheltered by the strong exterior or the uniform of one who protects us today.
Taylor ~
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/30/2006
Fine work in this reality bite Karla! We need to be reminded often!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 6/30/2006
Without our brave soldiers we would not have a Fourth of July Celebration . . . Very good, Karla.
Reviewed by A PAX 6/30/2006
Thank you for this :)
pax A
Reviewed by F William Broome 6/30/2006
Until we find that magic formula to stop war, we need such men and total committmment. This is a masterful statement in poetry. Thanks you from a Veteran. - Bill

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 6/30/2006
Nice sentiments...well said
Reviewed by Peter Paton 6/30/2006
Reviewed by Sue Hess 6/30/2006
damn said it all

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