|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Laid bare and no way to hide all your faults and no desire to change. When I read that last line I was touched by the bare insight into yourself and your knowledge of yourself.|
|Reviewed by Dawnamerra Hayes
|The most profound sentence for me in this great poem is the last. It speaks of a woman unsure of another's reaction to her, but at the same time, quite comfortable and condident with who she is. Great piece for young women to read to boost their self-perception.|
|Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame
|I surely fear to see
As you look at this woman
With no way to hide
And no desire to change
this goes into my library!! Methinks there is a lesson here just for me..thankyou Sue.
|Reviewed by Steve Ralph
|beautiful poem, that's exactly the way true love should be, open and honest with no secrets at all.
thank you for sharing.
|Reviewed by Theresa Koch
|Great write I feel I have lived these words~`*|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|That a brave poem
being open is hard for alot of people
you have courage.....and heart.....
must be deep in love.....
good for you......pax A
|Reviewed by bluecornflower orangetiger
|this is beautiful ,Sue. sorry it took me so long to see it. Mary|
|Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
|Brilliant evocation of the way love overwhelms us|
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Alright! I really like your spirit and this poem, Sue!|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Now that's truly putting it all on the line, Sue.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Exactly...seen that too...and much MUCH more!!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Damn, and here I thought there would be pictures...:( Ed|
|Reviewed by Ken Colonsay
|A turtle without her shell, but all the more beautiful! If you can find someone to be naked and honest with it's a blessing as there is a big cover-up in the world, as you probably know. :-)))
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|I know, don't you just hate it when we are seen as not worthy by someone? These are the kind you can stack BB's for and they still won't be happy! Those who look down upon us with contempt will have their day, Sue.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Yeah, yeah where's the pics...|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|When you giving it all you got there is nothing you can hide anyway. Very good.|
|Reviewed by April Smith
|It's a scary, exposed feeling! Thanks for sharing, April|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|A very vulnerable place to be, whether physical or emotional. And certainly a time when pretense must take a back seat to hope.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Very nice, Sue, I enjoyed reading this; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.