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| Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse |
8/5/2008 |
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| Beautiful image of a struggle to hold onto memories of someone loved. I like the idea of using music to hold onto that image. I sense loss here and hope that it is because of the same loss I see coming. We have a sixteen year old daughter and I still remember when she was a silly girl. But she's growing out of those earlier years and those days are becoming memories. I hope music will one day help me remember those silly days. |
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| Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten |
5/1/2007 |
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This is so touching William...we never know when we will be called home...so be as silly as you can while we have the chance...
Thanks for sharing your heart with this one...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~ |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
4/19/2007 |
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But... A Silly Beautiful heartfelt Poem!
That brings out memories to savor!
The flow was unending and sweet!
Warmly, Warrior PURPLE Lady Sheeeoox |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
1/17/2007 |
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Sad, to go so young..
Thanks for sharing William.. |
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| Reviewed by Gloria Buono Daly |
1/15/2007 |
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| There's a lot of feeling and touching messages for every "silly girl" in this thought provoking prose. Thanks for sharing My best, Gloria |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/2/2007 |
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Heartfelt and compelling, William. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
7/24/2006 |
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Wish I had memories like this..alas my youth was a flat line..mmmm( strict parents)
This touched me deeply..
I saved this one..thankyou William!
Vesna:) |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
7/7/2006 |
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| I've been that silly girl. Lovely poem, Bill. Very touching and bittersweet. ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
7/5/2006 |
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This poem tells me to appreciate the present, we never know how long it is ours..........:(
ty for this reminder
pax A |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/1/2006 |
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Those are the precious memories that make us who we are!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Taylor Ryan |
7/1/2006 |
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...you make me think of all the little things that trigger memories so sweet, just when you thought you had them tucked into the safest place. How nice to remember and bring them out again when there is need.
Taylor~ |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen (Reader) |
7/1/2006 |
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what a lovely memory~
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
7/1/2006 |
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Your memories continue to bloom as a fresh flower. Beautiful verse.
Susan |
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