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Come to my window in mired value, alternative way of expressing color temperatures,
you've been down that pine-scented road,
think by now you know the term saltwater taffy came when a storm blew waves over a vendor's tray of pink taffy,
Come to my window shipshape, as neat as the knife-edge crease in your khakis,
post-card vignette, your harness writes poetry and publishes well-received volumes of orgasmic verse,
Come to my window, see the amber skyline in the backdrop, how tiny it looks to the bigness of the bush,
and how it melds together so that it is hard to see where the bush ends and the suburb begins, swirling in the corporate glow,
Come to my window, come face-to-face with it, come to me across the parquetry on the floor, follow the scent of the bush and the lavender oil,
The curtain of erotic rights of passion and disclosure, silk from the secretions of a fuzzy caterpillar,
I take a deep breath as you come to my window...
Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
8/15/2009 |
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The window, misused; seeking lust,
Quivers beneath your breath and thrust. |
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| Reviewed by Jackie Coupe |
7/2/2007 |
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What a warm and happy thought for this dreary monday afternoon.
Thanks for the sexual murmur Sage!
Thanks |
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| Reviewed by Kenny Moon |
7/4/2006 |
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| very accomplished - women are very inspiring, I could look at them all day! :-) k |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
7/3/2006 |
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| Hmmm. ok I'll brcome a lesbian, fed up with blokes, so how do I find these like minded women? Do they mind a bloke being a lesbian...Or that could be sexual harrasment... |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
7/3/2006 |
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| Good imagery here... |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
7/3/2006 |
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| A lot of tongue-in-cheek stuff heah, Sage, at least I found that to be the case. Taking off of standards, putting your own standard to it, you never fail to give much more than you take . . . literary-wise . . . And THAT is a good thing. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/2/2006 |
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I think these verses are very lovely; a beautiful invitation. Thank you for sharing them, Sage. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
7/2/2006 |
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Metamorphasis in sophistacated verse.
Susan |
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